Song from writing competition + 1st audio

by **Big-T** » May 4th, '07, 22:41

I recorded the song i wrote for the song writing competition. I did it over Jay-Z -The Blueprint instrumental. I warn you, it's my first audio of the first song ive ever wrote, and the quality of the recording is kinda shizzle. It's only a first draft 2 lol. Neway enjoy i guess :sweating:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/life-mp3.html

p.s i cant do the chorus so theres gaps where they shuld be :whistle:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » May 4th, '07, 22:49

actually man for a first big big props :worship:

really, you got flow lyrics and emotion, delivery isnt there but thats coz of the quality :sweating:

tips, get someone to mix it for you coz it could be cleaned up good

also if you want ill spit a chorus on it for you :flower:

and just keep practicing man, give it 4 months of practice and i can see you being sick as hell :smoking:

survival of the british :shifty:

lol

by **Big-T** » May 4th, '07, 22:51

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:actually man for a first big big props

really, you got flow lyrics and emotion, delivery isnt there but thats coz of the quality

tips, get someone to mix it for you coz it could be cleaned up good

also if you want ill spit a chorus on it for you

and just keep practicing man, give it 4 months of practice and i can see you being sick as hell

survival of the british lol

lol thanx a lot for the feed bar ill keep practising. Yeah if u want just download it and spit a chorus on it coz i cant so yeh give it a shot if u can be bovered. And Survival of the British will be done in no time :shifty:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » May 4th, '07, 22:55

^ if i get time ill try do something for ya man :happy:

keep it up im intrested to se ehwo you progresss now :whistle:

by **Big-T** » May 5th, '07, 10:40

^ lol yeah u wanna see if i progress the same as when i was text battling dont u :shifty:

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » May 5th, '07, 15:08

its very good for ur 1st time....
keep practisin....im new aswell in this 'rap-game'

so

good work
and u got that flow :flower:

by **Mc Cubz** » May 6th, '07, 10:11

Big-T wrote:I recorded the song i wrote for the song writing competition. I did it over Jay-Z -The Blueprint instrumental. I warn you, it's my first audio of the first song ive ever wrote, and the quality of the recording is kinda shizzle. It's only a first draft 2 lol. Neway enjoy i guess

http://www.zshare.net/audio/life-mp3.html

p.s i cant do the chorus so theres gaps where they shuld be

PLEASE BECOME A RAPPER, you have a natural mc voice g, similar to hayzi in fact, u and him would be a nice collab, jus work on flow/confidence/voice/projection all dat shit, your lyrics what can I say its fuking poetry man, on a level, ( a good think ), dont get too over-confident cos dreams get shashed the fuck to pieces in this world, but I see alot of potential in you if you put the work in! props g :worship:

by **Big-T** » May 6th, '07, 10:57

^ thanx 4 the feed Chrissssssssssss

^ and Mc Cubz thanx 4 the advice i will definitely consider becoming a rapper lol (im guessing u maybe no a lot about this u being an MC ?) that was my 1st audio but once i get shit together itll probably sound a bit better :smoking:

thanx a lot man

Song from writing competition + 1st audio

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