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NEW, Kez, Wondering Why

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NEW, Kez, Wondering Why

Postby Kez » May 2nd, '07, 17:33

Well i haven't posted anything for ages, so i thought i would post one of the tracks i've done for the tape as of so far.

Info on the tape
The tape is probably about 80% done. I only have 4 tracks left to record.
This tape was made almost completely with my school in mind. It has a lot of messages to give to them, so i don't want any bitching that there's a lot of anger on it.
MAKE SURE YOU READ THAT BEFORE YOU FUCKING POST. GET IT INTO YOUR MIND.
It should, all things going right, be finished by the end of this week.

Tracklist (This track is bolded):
01 - Kez - Let's Go (Skit)
02 - Kez - To All
03 - Kez - Fuck You
04 - Kez - Digital Disaster
05 - Kez - Run Away
06 - Kez - You'll Never Stop Me
07 - Kez - I Deserve It
08 - Kez - Give Two Shits
09 - Kez - What A Life
10 - Kez ft. ThomasAguanis (hopefully) - Radio (Skit)
11 - Kez - Who I Am
12 - Kez ft. Big Ax-D - Hate Us Again
13 - Kez - No Apologies
14 - Kez ft. Bar - Our Music (Skit)
15 - Kez - Wondering Why
16 - Kez - Retaliate
17 - Kez - In The End
18 - Kez ft. Bar - Judge Me
19 - Kez - 19 Reasons (Skit)
20 - Kez - You Never Learn

Link:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/15-wondering-why-mp3.html
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Postby Hadez » May 2nd, '07, 19:54

it was good, i liked it. the beat was tight. in the beginnin of the first verse i couldnt understand u cuz you were kinda sayin things all over the place in the background. otha than that it was good. propz :flower:
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » May 2nd, '07, 20:00

i love the chorus...ur lyrics are kool too
and beat is tight...
good job with this.....do u got the real version? :whistle:
but i like wut u done to it...and ur skip too chorus is good :D :worship:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 2nd, '07, 23:21

great verses man, flow on them was good i dont think you every fell of beat, lyrics were good aswell :worship:

keep it up :8)
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Postby B.A.D. » May 3rd, '07, 03:59

mayn.... I'm sure i was in another track....

I don't like that track that much(hate us again)..... lets do another....

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Postby randomghost » May 3rd, '07, 05:15

flow is tight, beat is hot...good work man, lookin forward to hear the tape :flower:
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » May 3rd, '07, 22:10

Sounds sick man, the beat was hot, your flow was tight, and it sounded nice how you fell out from the verses into the chorus. No complaints about this one.

5/5

Really lookin' forward to the tape by the way.
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Postby mart85 » May 3rd, '07, 22:22

nice track... your flow was on point, and your aggressive delivery was good....

keep it up :happy:
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Postby $0 R3@L » May 3rd, '07, 23:56

flow has improved alot,lyrics are still nothing complex but work.Big improvment from ya old stuff though.
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Postby die2nite » May 4th, '07, 00:27

It's not bad but it sounds a little rough due to the aggression. It also seems like you're trying to put too many words into a single bar, so you probably need to shorten your lines a bit.

Other then that not bad.
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Postby Kez » May 6th, '07, 23:44

Thanks Killa :worship: :worship:
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