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Postby Tash8 » May 7th, '07, 04:32

Hello,

propz to hadez for all the help on this

Listen

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Postby Hadez » May 7th, '07, 04:48

like i said, i think this is ur best beat so far. propz :smoking:
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Postby B.A.D. » May 7th, '07, 05:31

now this is a beat...

still needs some work... but its too good for a start

major propz on this n congrats for the succes...

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Postby Tash8 » May 7th, '07, 06:03

thanks :D

more feed please
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 7th, '07, 13:29

better but you need to download better sounds, apart form that just keep practicing
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Postby AspirinE » May 7th, '07, 13:37

The beat needs more swing, more smooth bass, more on point melody.

And try not using two different snares. The snare signifies the end of a rhyme bar, unless u adding a pre-snare for effect, this isnt gonna do.

Its better than wat u did before but its not rapable.
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » May 7th, '07, 13:45

yea its way better than ur others :D
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Postby Tash8 » May 7th, '07, 14:46

AspirinE wrote:The beat needs more swing, more smooth bass, more on point melody.

And try not using two different snares. The snare signifies the end of a rhyme bar, unless u adding a pre-snare for effect, this isnt gonna do.

Its better than wat u did before but its not rapable.


thanks, i kinda understand what your saying. :D

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Postby DJ SWiFT » May 10th, '07, 15:24

in my opinion the beat needs more excitement to lighten it up, try reaching further up and down the pitch scale wen creating the base melody or adding in a nice hit/stab

keep going tho bro, its the only way to learn
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