new beat by me (done in 15 minutes)

by **randomghost** » May 14th, '07, 05:14

its not one of ma best, but it still ok....

http://www.zshare.net/audio/random-prod ... t-mp3.html

feed appreciate it

by **Tash8** » May 14th, '07, 05:17

it's ok, the drum pattern sounds good, but the melody itself sounds like an intro, not something you'd rap too.. add more umm bang to it, na' mean?

by **DC4952** » May 14th, '07, 05:20

well it wasnt that bad. the melody was alrite. for 15 minutes u did an alrite job, but keep practicin tho. ull get better and more in depth to makin beats

by **randomghost** » May 14th, '07, 05:25

DC4952 wrote:well it wasnt that bad. the melody was alrite. for 15 minutes u did an alrite job, but keep practicin tho. ull get better and more in depth to makin beats

thanks for the feed DC i really appreciate it :flower:

and i will practice more :flower:

Tash8 wrote:it's ok, the drum pattern sounds good, but the melody itself sounds like an intro, not something you'd rap too.. add more umm bang to it, na' mean?

yeah i agree..but i still need to practice more.lol :flower:

by **MoBrat** » May 14th, '07, 06:32

not bad man i've heard better from u but A) for 15 min thats good B) even if i was given an hour im still not sure i could make something this simple lol so good shit keep making beats man eventually u'll have tons of sick beats :smoking:

by **Hadez** » May 14th, '07, 06:40

like everybody else said its good for only 15 minutes. propz and keep it up :flower:

by **Xray** » May 14th, '07, 06:47

nice beat man but the tempo needs to be a ilil faster cause atm it sounds like you trynna explain to someone how to make beats or somfin lol so yea make it alil faster den all good

by **randomghost** » May 14th, '07, 08:01

thanks for the feed everyone...i really appreciate :worship:

.....but thats not the best of me though :sweating:

...

and mobrat holla at me wid some of ur beats man..i wanna hear them :8)

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » May 14th, '07, 12:38

yea its pretty good fo 15minits
but yea keep practisin

by **mart85** » May 14th, '07, 15:51

yeah, for 15 minutes, I guess you didn't give it all you've got, but you should try to be careful with your melodies... cause in this case, you have the drum pattern and the instruments are high-pitched, and it sounds kinda empty.... you should try to have more instruments to cover all the frequencies (like low, mid and high frequencies)... especially with a bass... then something that'll be in the mid frequencies, then high instruments like the ones in your beat... you don't have to do that in every beat, but most of the time, if you want your beat to sound better, you have to make sure that your instruments/synths (or your drums to an extend) cover pretty much all the frequencies :happy:

by **randomghost** » May 15th, '07, 05:10

mart85 wrote:yeah, for 15 minutes, I guess you didn't give it all you've got, but you should try to be careful with your melodies... cause in this case, you have the drum pattern and the instruments are high-pitched, and it sounds kinda empty.... you should try to have more instruments to cover all the frequencies (like low, mid and high frequencies)... especially with a bass... then something that'll be in the mid frequencies, then high instruments like the ones in your beat... you don't have to do that in every beat, but most of the time, if you want your beat to sound better, you have to make sure that your instruments/synths (or your drums to an extend) cover pretty much all the frequencies

i will work wid that, and thanxz for the advice mart 85 :worship:

new beat by me (done in 15 minutes)

new beat by me (done in 15 minutes)

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