by ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 16th, '07, 17:17
chorus was different, kez on his singing style lol, wasnt bad though
tash - first verse - was ok flow needs to be stepped up on this verse, but ok
kez - secone verse - i love your flow on this, lyrics are sick aswell, your voice is getting better aswell man, your starting to mature in your music keep it up and give it a couple of more months your goni be one of the sickiest on here
tash - third verse - flow was better on this but mumbling ruined the verse, you ate alot of your words, it ruined it for me witch is bad coz the flow was better than the first verse, just make sure you know the lyrics of by heart but still keep them infront of you incase you go to stumble you can see whats coming next, also spit the verse at least 20 times before recording, then record it like 10 times and pick the best take..i know not alot of people have time to do that all the time including myself but thats the best way