"I Promise" is on my Myspace
http://www.myspace.com/p0isoncontrol
The New version of "The Prince" is on my Soundclick
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... dID=643543
I gaurantee you'll all love them. leave feed plz.

codyp wrote:It may be just me, but your main melody's don't go with the background melody. It kinda throws me off.
I like the concept of the prince beat though. Need to break off from the organ a bit though. And have more hitting drums, you bass is tight but, the snare needs to be risen.
I love the like lazer shot things though threw me off at first but sounded tight.
Syanied wrote:codyp wrote:It may be just me, but your main melody's don't go with the background melody. It kinda throws me off.
I like the concept of the prince beat though. Need to break off from the organ a bit though. And have more hitting drums, you bass is tight but, the snare needs to be risen.
I love the like lazer shot things though threw me off at first but sounded tight.
the melody may sound off but that's how it was supposed to go. the background melody that you hear is basicly that louder one with more notes.
and on the prince. the organ is the main melody itself. if i took that out then the whole thing would go from it's dark feel to something i didnt want. but your right about the drums. so i changed them and i made the snares louder.
either way. thanx for the feed. it was greatly appreciated.
codyp wrote:Syanied wrote:codyp wrote:It may be just me, but your main melody's don't go with the background melody. It kinda throws me off.
I like the concept of the prince beat though. Need to break off from the organ a bit though. And have more hitting drums, you bass is tight but, the snare needs to be risen.
I love the like lazer shot things though threw me off at first but sounded tight.
the melody may sound off but that's how it was supposed to go. the background melody that you hear is basicly that louder one with more notes.
and on the prince. the organ is the main melody itself. if i took that out then the whole thing would go from it's dark feel to something i didnt want. but your right about the drums. so i changed them and i made the snares louder.
either way. thanx for the feed. it was greatly appreciated.
did you upload the new version with the louder drums? I would like to hear it.
codyp wrote:It may be just me, but your main melody's don't go with the background melody. It kinda throws me off.
I like the concept of the prince beat though. Need to break off from the organ a bit though. And have more hitting drums, you bass is tight but, the snare needs to be risen.
I love the like lazer shot things though threw me off at first but sounded tight.
DC4952 wrote:i already gave feed on the first one, but the prince was cool. melodies were good, tho the sine sounded kinda off to me. ur improving alot on beats, keep it up
Syanied wrote:DC4952 wrote:i already gave feed on the first one, but the prince was cool. melodies were good, tho the sine sounded kinda off to me. ur improving alot on beats, keep it up
should i show you the flp so then you can better explain why you think its off?
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