*~`NEW SHIT: RTK, IceAxe, Kez, Tash - "Vengance"`~

by **IceAxe** » May 26th, '07, 18:17

http://www.zshare.net/audio/203002244fb204/

Ok,my first audio finally... as well as RTK's

Feed is Appreciated

Mixed by Tash.... this was a free beat from SoundClick

Lyrics

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » May 26th, '07, 18:40

chorus - dont sing tash lmao

for RTK's first it was cool just needs to practice more

ice-axe's did real good for a first, nice lyrics, and ok flow, again just needs to keep practising

kez's verse is the best, goin right at that true prick, witch you killed him by the way just with this verse, whenver he drops his diss (witch is at both of us now) imma kill him on a track with you :smoking:

tash's flow improved alot more than las, your getting better slowly but surely man

everyone (expect kez) need to work on prounouncing/delivery/flow , dont worry about anything else right now, once you get flow and everything then go onto increasing the lyrical side to it

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » May 26th, '07, 19:37

yup its a good track...but

everyone (expect kez) need to work on prounouncing/delivery/flow

and i kinda liked the chorus....
kez did great on it :flower:

others...just keep practisin

by **Tash8** » May 26th, '07, 19:38

thanks

more feed.

by **mart85** » May 26th, '07, 21:58

Bar pretty much summed it up... I agree with everthing he said.... except for kez, you all need to practise a lot more (but that's normal, you're starting :happy:

)

like the pronounciation part, I read the lyrics while listening to the song, and I noticed a lot of words were weirdly pronounced :sweating:

when that happens, you should record another take, until you say it correctly/perfectly

if you wanna practise your delivery/flow/pronounciation, I would suggest practising your verse like a million times, until you can pronounce everything perfectly, and until every syllable has its own place on the beat... and don't be afraid to rap loud and have emotion in your voice!

but good job, and keep practising :happy:

by **IceAxe** » May 26th, '07, 22:01

thanks for feedin you guys :worship:

keep it comin

by **Hadez** » May 26th, '07, 22:35

basically everything bar said :sweating:

keep it up :flower:

by **$0 R3@L** » May 27th, '07, 00:03

erm everyone done well for their first track,didnt really get the concept of the track,you all seemed to rap about different things :unsure:

.Bar said your dissing someone kez and you cant really make out who,all i heard was mobrat :zipped:

i thought that was done?

few more tracks and you guys should pick up the basics you got the basis to all be decent rappers,good job.

by **Kez** » May 27th, '07, 00:04

$0 R3@L wrote:erm everyone done well for their first track,didnt really get the concept of the track,you all seemed to rap about different things .Bar said your dissing someone kez and you cant really make out who,all i heard was mobrat i thought that was done?

few more tracks and you guys should pick up the basics you got the basis to all be decent rappers,good job.

I'm not dissing MoBrat
I'm dissing this guy called True who said he was gonna diss me cause of the thing with MoBrat, but now that that's over he persists in saying he's made tracks against me

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » May 27th, '07, 00:07

$0 R3@L wrote:erm everyone done well for their first track,didnt really get the concept of the track,you all seemed to rap about different things .Bar said your dissing someone kez and you cant really make out who,all i heard was mobrat i thought that was done?

few more tracks and you guys should pick up the basics you got the basis to all be decent rappers,good job.

its not towards mobrat

some guy from soundclick got involved with kez & mobrat beef AFTER mobrat and kez had straightened things out..he didnt drop it at all kept posting messages on dissing kez, and i read a couple he was basically jumping into a beef to look "tough" so to speak, i posted a message on his soundclick telling him to stop being a dick that both kez n mobrat sorted it out..needless to say im now getting dissed by him and his soundclick kamakazee posse :laughing:

either way the guys a dick and cant prounounce anythign on a track never mind write a diss

edit - kez beat me to it :angry:

by **$0 R3@L** » May 27th, '07, 00:08

oh that clown on soundclick? pay no attention bruv...i aint sure of his connections with mobrat but i wouldnt honestly waste a minute of the wally.He should mind his own buisness and make music rather then net surfin for disses :angry:

by **Tash8** » May 27th, '07, 20:42

thanks guys,

more feed plz

by **Tash8** » May 28th, '07, 23:41

bujump

by **Tash8** » May 29th, '07, 05:35

OK NEW MIXING, I remixed the chorus, messed with ices verse, it sounds weirder but his voice is a bit more clearer IMO, and i made it a bit shorter

please refeed

http://www.zshare.net/audio/20594480311d82/

by **Nu Syd** » May 29th, '07, 08:19

um,which to download then man, ^ that or the original posts

edit:i got the second one,the chorus would be better if the noise was removed and sung abit harder,louder, quality needs alota work,ya'll flows need improvement to, second verse especailly, be loud. Keep at it guys, Kez was the stand out,was clear,lyrics is ok,flow sliped abit,decent.

*~`NEW SHIT: RTK, IceAxe, Kez, Tash - "Vengance"`~

*~`NEW SHIT: RTK, IceAxe, Kez, Tash - "Vengance"`~

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