**NEW** She Cries Herself To Sleep

[Rapsoldier101]

Not Technicly "New" It Was On My First Album "Agree 2 Disagree" But I Re-Recorded It To Put It On My Demo "Business Talk" With A Few Edits So Here It Is, Its prolly My Deepest Song, so Here It Is Give Me some Feedback

lil m - she cries herself to sleep.mp3 - 10.51MB


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[Tash8]

better of your shit, but your voice wasn't really "dark" like your lyrics were. I dont know if i should give you this advice cuz i can't do this my voice.. but you should try to adjust your voice to fit the beat and the mood.

[Rapsoldier101]

iight thanks for the tip

[l-Hadez-l]

real nice, i like the concept. keep it up

[mart85]

better of your shit, but your voice wasn't really "dark" like your lyrics were. I dont know if i should give you this advice cuz i can't do this my voice.. but you should try to adjust your voice to fit the beat and the mood.

yeah I agree... it's a nice song... and about your voice, the way you say "she cries herself to sleep", it almost sounds like it's not the same person lol... if you rapped with that voice, I think it could have been better.... it's hard to judge tho, but it seems like it would have fitted the beat and the mood more...

nice job tho, it's a good deep song, keep it up

[Rapsoldier101]

iight, than i might end up re-recording it again

[Tash8]

iight, than i might end up re-recording it again

well like people tell me, record it as much as necessary

[Rapsoldier101]

iight, than i might end up re-recording it again

well like people tell me, record it as much as necessary

yupp the way i think of it when i have to do stuff like this is, "its gonna be jus as hard, but most likly harder if i make it in the industry so i better ready myself"

Edit: The I Like The Way The First Verse Is. But The Second Verse Is In My Oppinion What Should Be "Darker"

[B.A.D.]

this is a good track

I don't care about the voice or the mixing

this is a nice track.... I actually liked it

[Tash8]

this is a good track

I don't care about the voice or the mixing

this is a nice track.... I actually liked it

I agree with it being a good track, but theres no point of telling him that it's good track without critizing it, I think he has a lot of potential so i'm trying to give him my thoughts.