Suicide note - Codyp hot of the press shit.

[codyp]

I made the beat, wrote the song, and recorded it all today.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/2307048592fe7c/

Please tell me what you think, I haven't recorded a whole song in a while.

[Kez]

Personally i don't think you deserve feed after your comments about how shit this site is

However

The beat's good
Your flow's good
The lyrics are good
And the hook is fire, especially at the end when you switched it round that was funny
So 9/10 for this

[$0 R3@L]

no offence,

but suggesting everyone's standard around here is bad and yet your making tracks like this is not only hypocritical but bullshit.If your gonna talk shit atleast back it up with some decent music but you dont.

Therefore no feed here buddy

keep working at it.

[AspirinE]

umm wtf .. lol .....

the beat is vague, has no tempo, and u don't rhyme bar to bar, i suppose that has something to do with the beat. I heard your other track and refraned from commenting, coz i actually thought u were kidding with that shit.

Sorry, cant enjoy it, if ur doing rap, at least follow the basic rules of structure, then improvise ur "lazy","punk" or watever style.

[die2nite]

I fell asleep after about 37 seconds. You cannot spit that slow without being really special and expect people to enjoy it.

I don't know what you said about this site, but plain period based on this, you need a lot of work.

[DelinQuent]

like die2nite said, you rapped way to slow. i did like the last line "is this the end of my life, or the end of a fear" but the track can't be listened to more than once, it's just not good. plus, the way you talk, i'd picture someone who talks like that to be working in an office with a bunch of white nerdy guys, not standing in front of a mic rapping.

[codyp]

Personally i don't think you deserve feed after your comments about how shit this site is

However

The beat's good
Your flow's good
The lyrics are good
And the hook is fire, especially at the end when you switched it round that was funny
So 9/10 for this

Actually what I ment by that doesn't mean alot, is I haven't heard anything real great on this site to my ears. The truth is I think plenty of people have talent on this site, and I think some have a chance. But I also believe alot of people on here just don't know hip-hop. Not saying I am an authority on the subject, I just love music. I am sorry if I offended anyone. I seriously believe alot of you have talent or else I wouldn't even care to post on this site.


Ps: thank you for the feedback, I do appreciate this.

and Thank you everyone else.