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Postby Phantom » Jun 18th, '07, 01:10

done to my loop of the biggie song 1970 somethin but this is just somethin i did cuz i wanted to rap

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInf ... ID=5463690

peep it and let me know
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Re: new verse

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 18th, '07, 01:22

you should have let the beat run a little more or fade out, lmao, i thought the player had fucked up lol

anywae, sick flow and sick lyrics, nothing much more i can say :worship:
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Re: new verse

Postby Phantom » Jun 18th, '07, 01:23

thanks bar

actually theres like 3 minutes aftert it cuz i looped the beat for somethin i might do but i just ended it right there

but thanks for the feed
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Re: new verse

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 18th, '07, 03:46

Its good, the choice of the beat is completely not my style n the quality is fucked up

but your work on it made it great, nice track mayn :smoking:
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Re: new verse

Postby Phantom » Jun 18th, '07, 03:56

ok cool thanks 4 feed
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Re: new verse

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 18th, '07, 19:05

i found it hard to hear what you were saying, and you kept the same tone of voice throughout the verse... EDIT- i listened again, and nevermind the tone of voice lol. it wasn't bad, but you just seemed kinda bored.

of the lyrics i did hear they were good. and overall decent job, keep working
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Re: new verse

Postby Phantom » Jun 18th, '07, 19:27

thanks 4 the feed
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