Life of Tears - Preview

[Tash8]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/2360499d7aa806/

this is just a preview, another words i want some critiscm so when i go to rerecord it i can improve on shit

thanks

[stevethetruth]

yo some good shit here, one thing i should say is try to use your voice to the fullest you sound a lil bored (i think i said that on aim haha) but yeah once you work that voice everything should be a-okay


btw liking the flow here

hope to see a full verison soon

[Tash8]

thanks on the comments yea next time i'll make sure to record when no ones home so i can yell

[Flamez]

i like it sounds nice man

[Tash8]

thanks for the feed

[Tash8]

bump!

[Tash8]

nah, people were home, so i just had to keep it quiet haha

but yea i'll make sure to do it when their gone.

[mart85]

yeah, like steve and killa said, having a little more emotion will help, but you already said you'd do it when there's no one at your house

if you want advice tho, just try to practise more to not have to think about the flow, lyrics and the breathing etc... and it'll be easier to have emotion in your voice

it seemed nice tho

[Tash8]

^ thanks mart, yea i'll try that