by Tash8 » Jun 27th, '07, 18:25
nice, i dont like the fact that u used fight music beat because to me thats was an amazing song, so it just made my faith for you harder, ya know?
anyway's ur first verse, u rapped way way to fast for the beat and u slurred with ur "s"'s too much...
the second verse, the one after the beat switch was real real nice, good way to change ur flow.
good job.