seriously it's great I love it

but I thought you'd send me your acapella tho so that I could mix and master the song

cause the version I sent you wasn't of perfect sound quality and it wasn't 100% ready to have vocals on it... do you still have your acapella, cause I could do it
and seriously, while listening to it I was really inspired to make the song even better with the beat and the mixing

the chorus was great, you had good emotion in your voice throughout the whole song etc... that's the type of song I would listen to (either for the vocals or the amazing beat

lol jk)
and good job on writing the lyrics and coming up with those melodies, you did great with that too
edit: PM me please, I had some plans for that song

EDIT #2: I just realized I clicked on the same link twice, at first lol... so I thought both songs were the same, but with some subtle differences... turns out I only listened to "On My Own", so what I said^^ applied to "On My Own"... but the other song is real nice too, good chorus and and strong verses... I still prefer On My Own tho
