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Postby Eckoo » Sep 22nd, '07, 16:51

pls comment my tracks :D i just did the music...that accapella that is in whoaa i got from a friend


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Postby Kez » Sep 22nd, '07, 17:43

Just Me -
Pretty good, i like the melody

Klapy -
Pretty good too, the claps could be a bit quieter

She -
Is that a sample from Kim i hear? It sounds like the very beginning of it
It's okay, melody is quite repetitive and dull, the drums are okay

Whoaa -
You're off flow a lot
Delivery is okay, you're a bit quiet
Lyrics are okay
Hook needs more layover and needs be louder to make it stand out from the verses.

Whoaa Instrumental -
Bit boring. Not much melody, it's just loads of drums.
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Postby Tash8 » Sep 22nd, '07, 18:25

post it in the sutdio
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Postby Eckoo » Sep 22nd, '07, 22:09

thanks alot for you're comments i'll will work on them to make them better :D i'll post them when they are done :D
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