by Kez » Sep 22nd, '07, 17:43
Just Me -
Pretty good, i like the melody
Klapy -
Pretty good too, the claps could be a bit quieter
She -
Is that a sample from Kim i hear? It sounds like the very beginning of it
It's okay, melody is quite repetitive and dull, the drums are okay
Whoaa -
You're off flow a lot
Delivery is okay, you're a bit quiet
Lyrics are okay
Hook needs more layover and needs be louder to make it stand out from the verses.
Whoaa Instrumental -
Bit boring. Not much melody, it's just loads of drums.