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Random Ghost - I Couldnt Believe Verse (UNRELEASED)

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Random Ghost - I Couldnt Believe Verse (UNRELEASED)

Postby randomghost » Sep 23rd, '07, 06:47

i did it before and it was supposed to be on a collab but it never happend...so here is the verse

http://www.zshare.net/audio/3801429171d44a/

feed will be appreciated :happy:
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Re: Random Ghost - I Couldnt Believe Verse (UNRELEASED)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 1st, '07, 15:01

nice flow and emotion, lyrics are good but you have better, deep lyrics are always a plus though, qualitt and mixing arent your best, and beat is kool :y:
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Re: Random Ghost - I Couldnt Believe Verse (UNRELEASED)

Postby randomghost » Oct 2nd, '07, 06:44

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:nice flow and emotion, lyrics are good but you have better, deep lyrics are always a plus though, qualitt and mixing arent your best, and beat is kool :y:
thanks for the feed bro :flower:
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Re: Random Ghost - I Couldnt Believe Verse (UNRELEASED)

Postby sinemm » Oct 3rd, '07, 15:21

sounds like you were trying to be slow according to the beat but it got a little bit weird
at the beginning :unsure:
i mean umm like you were trying to prolong the words to catch the flow
but sounds nice
work on it more will be good for sure :y:
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Re: Random Ghost - I Couldnt Believe Verse (UNRELEASED)

Postby randomghost » Oct 4th, '07, 08:42

sinemm wrote:sounds like you were trying to be slow according to the beat but it got a little bit weird
at the beginning :unsure:
i mean umm like you were trying to prolong the words to catch the flow
but sounds nice
work on it more will be good for sure :y:
thanks hunny..i will :flower:
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