****J-Blind - Depression (New shit)*******

[Blind]

Check this lyrical crazy shit!!! You just gotta listen to this!! And feed me back, of course!!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/4375491185d3db/

[Rap Dogg]

Check out some of ma' shit.


http://www.showcaseyourmusic.com/rapdogg

[Phantom]

i couldnt make out A LOT of it..your emotion sounded good and your flow was good

from what i could make out, the lyrics were cool. beat was nice

but like the dude above me said, your pronunciation was bad on this one

work on that and youll be set

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

You have the same problem everyone does when starting out, terrible pronounciation.

who?
lol....
well wut is already said..... flow was nice and emotion was there...
just ur pronouncation... but keep it up...u'll get better

[Blind]

O'k, now I gotta work on it, thought song was hot, anyway I'll prove that I can do the song with good pronouncation, just wait, just wait...

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like maybe said you prounouncation needs work.

but apart form that, you seem to have a good vicous flow.


you lyrics sounded kool though, maybe a up in complexity needed but i cant make a fair judgement in one track.

chorus sounds kool aswell

keep it up man