Bodacious songs

[bodaciousent]

This song is called You Don't Wanna Battle Me

It's about this dude who wanted to battle me so I battled him and he choked and didn't say anything. and also just about people who under estamate me cause im female..ill add more later but give me feed back. It's recorded on a lap top so be aware of that..Give me feed back please!

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you dont wanna battle me.mp3 - 3.15MB

-Bodacious

[Requiem]

pretty good- beat's great, voice great, lyrics great.

the only thing bad i can say is your voice is sometimes overpowered by the beat, and you fell off a little on the chorus.

other than that, good job

[IceAxe]

yeah the beat was a bit overbearing. I'd say step up the complexity, but i havent yet heard anything else to fairly make that kind of judgment...

ps - if you need beats, get at me

[bodaciousent]

You got beats? Yeah I really need them. I produce but I actually didn't make that my brother did and he isn't a professional.It's harder on a lap top cuz it sounds worse lol actually that one sounded bad but on my program it sounds clear which is wierd but when I added it it got staticy..but thanks guys appriciate it.Ima add another one now that's better beat wise!

[bodaciousent]

This song is kind of just a club banger I guess lol

put your hands up.mp3 - 3.56MB

Let me know what you think! The beat is better and it's clearer.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

you quality is really bad and the beat is to loud and its not mixed nicely....sorry i know quality cant be helped but i atleast got to mentioned it coz these things affect your flow and stuf fn it aint fair to comment on it without mention thjis stuff is harming it


your flow seems as if its still getting found but you got a good understanding on the beat, just need more practice

your lyrics are fairly simple and if your goin down the MC route you need to up them alot, again just practice needed

you had energy and delivery though, it wasnt picked up very good because the mixing/quality ect. but you could sense it was there so thats good

just keep it up, and try buy a decent mic and learn a thing or 2 about mixing

[bodaciousent]

I didn't mix the beat and there recorded on a lap top I actually just today ordered my real studio equipment for my studio so it will be much better quiltiy..Quility affects everything! If the quility was good it would be better.. I know everything about rap I studied it and been around it all my life so I know shit like that..Just need my studio thats all and it's coming in 5-7 business days!

Thanks though!

[Tash8]

agreed with mcmaybe

the difference between rap and rock mainly is rock you sing to the music/notes while in rap you rap to the drums flow.

[bodaciousent]

It's harder on the lap top so when I do my studio stuff ill do better cuz when I flow in rap battles everyone loves it and says they never seen a female rap like me so I guess I just need better quility. but thanks for the help.

[Tash8]

Vocal talent has nothing to do with quality. Its not the laptop.

[bodaciousent]

Well when I spit out where i am everyone loves it but the lap top also messes up and changes everything plus the beat sucks but once I hit the studio ill add that stuff.

[Xray]

^^^correct..also wen rapping using comp its easier to do cause no pressure, u feel comfortable, no crowd, no critisizm just straight focusing...but your problem is that your a freestyler trynna make audios which is a new thing to you thats why you have to keep at it..till ur brain relises that you need to step it up..thats wat happened to me..cause wat your recording now will be laughed at by you in the future once your better

[bodaciousent]

Well I get alot of good responses about my music and I been at it along time with freestyling but recording I just started a few months ago when I got my lap top but I know alot of people who are big rappers and stuff and they all say im really good so idk. But ill send better stuff another time...and yeah once I get better and bigger im sure ill look back and be like wdf was that? im sure em does that with Infinate.but Thanks for the critsism it helps

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

^infinite was fucking dope, im sick of people hating on this album when its got eminems best rhymes on it

also, a tip, stop puting the critiscim down with " other people says this, big rappers sayed that" im in no way saying your lying about it, but you should just accept what people say coz remember, we dont know you in person, we have no reason to be nice to you and have no reason to hate on you, a completely nuetruel View, as in when you ask freinds they always have there judgment influenced by there knowledge of you as a person, just saying the feedback you recieve here will be 100% less bias than anywere else yet everyone they say (and in other threads aswell) you comeback with the freestyling and the battle rapping and big rappers n people you know saying your dope, the guys aint hating there just giving honest opinions, so just keep at it


lmao and if you heard my first shit n seen the stuff i got said you wouldnt beileive i even had the balls to keep doin it lol

[bodaciousent]

^infinite was fucking dope, im sick of people hating on this album when its got eminems best rhymes on it

also, a tip, stop puting the critiscim down with " other people says this, big rappers sayed that" im in no way saying your lying about it, but you should just accept what people say coz remember, we dont know you in person, we have no reason to be nice to you and have no reason to hate on you, a completely nuetruel View, as in when you ask freinds they always have there judgment influenced by there knowledge of you as a person, just saying the feedback you recieve here will be 100% less bias than anywere else yet everyone they say (and in other threads aswell) you comeback with the freestyling and the battle rapping and big rappers n people you know saying your dope, the guys aint hating there just giving honest opinions, so just keep at it


lmao and if you heard my first shit n seen the stuff i got said you wouldnt beileive i even had the balls to keep doin it lol

It aint my friends who said it and im not hating on his album I love all his albums but im just saying he has gotten much better. is all.and everyone goes through critsism as a rapper.. rap is my life it's do or die for me is all but I appriciate all the help and I hope you enjoy my new shit and will support me