What I Say-Untouchablez

[DelinQuent]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInf ... ID=5950504
Verse 1-PikPocket
Verse 2-DelinQuent
Verse 3 Part 1-PikPocket
Verse 3 Part 2-DelinQuent
Chorus-Both
It's been awhile, feedback and i'll love you forever lol

[Vettori]

Not bad, i have heard better from youse.
Who made the beat ?

It's Murderous

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Verse1 - the added agressive delivery makes your voice sound to thin, mixing or doing to takes of the verse and blending could have help this i think, lyrics are good, and flow is there

Chorus - sick

verse2 - flow is good in this, delivery is there, lyrics are good aswell

Verse3 - Part 1 - again with the delivery, not that the delivery is bad your voice just sounds weakened by it, flow again there and lyrics are good - Part 2 - again nice flow lyrics are good aswell and nice delivery

overall - while this doesnt blow my mind, its defiantly a good track, witch imma probly listen to more than once, the hook is nicely done i loved the effect and the beat is really sick, verses were all very good and on point, except for the thing with piks voice, but i know thats coz the mixing or just not mastered that style yet. so good track guys, you 2 need to work on a tape together or something would be sick

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the feed.
the beat was made by Sinima at http://www.soundclick.com/sinima

@Bar-We're actually just finishing up our demo, which should be in the mail within days. Thanks.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

@Bar-We're actually just finishing up our demo, which should be in the mail within days. Thanks.

you gonni leak it ?

[Call Me Pik]

Verse1 - the added agressive delivery makes your voice sound to thin, mixing or doing to takes of the verse and blending could have help this i think, lyrics are good, and flow is there

I think it sounds different cause we had to adjust the mic sensitivity real low since i was bein mad loud..and when that happens it messes wit the overall sound of what ever ur saying

it was either that or my verse would have spikes and clips all over the place

uppin for feed .....and we'll be hittin up the forum alot in the next few days wit some mainstream remixes be on the look out

[DelinQuent]

uppin for some feedback. thanks.

[Vettori]

Verse1 - the added agressive delivery makes your voice sound to thin, mixing or doing to takes of the verse and blending could have help this i think, lyrics are good, and flow is there

I think it sounds different cause we had to adjust the mic sensitivity real low since i was bein mad loud..and when that happens it messes wit the overall sound of what ever ur saying

it was either that or my verse would have spikes and clips all over the place

uppin for feed .....and we'll be hittin up the forum alot in the next few days wit some mainstream remixes be on the look out

You should just stand further away from the mic lol.... anyways As said Guys did ok, i have heard betterfrom youse...But keep em commin i love hearin new shit :P

[DelinQuent]

You should just stand further away from the mic lol.... anyways As said Guys did ok, i have heard betterfrom youse...But keep em commin i love hearin new shit :P

damn, that's a good idea lmao. thanks for the feedback

[B.A.D.]

STRONG BEAT fuckin loved it!!!!

Pik goes hard at the first verse!!, the anguer suits it perfect
the flow and delivery its amazing, extreeme beat!!

HOOK damn... gotta memo this, amazing, gots me background singin to it, loved it

DQ the delivery outstands on this, amazing shit!!!, the lyrics angry!, damn
this is about to be my fav track from u guys

Hook again, much love for it

PIK again, damn... lovin that yellin voice (no homo), again amazing delivery!!
DQ crazy crazy closing verse!!! fuckin great

hook amazing... better of what I can do mate... can't stop background singin to it

10/10 without any doubt
Quality is perfect

*make it a free download so I can get it on my mp3*

[DelinQuent]

glad to see that you liked it a lot. i personally love the song too, not to ride my own dick lol

[dbeauluvswomen]

I'm not good at giving feedback so I'm just gonna keep it simple..

I thought yall both went hard..especially yall first verses..but loved them all none the less and the chorus was nice..good flow and rhymes. Sick track and collab. Stay up

[DelinQuent]

thats for the feed.

[mart85]

sick track... first verse was real good, but like bar said, your voice sounded a bit thin, maybe some more layovers with a lower voice would have helped

hook is catchy and effective

second verse real nice again, sick delivery from DQ ...

third verse, again like the first verse, pik's voice sounded a bit thin, but the verse was nice nonetheless... and DQ was sick again

seriously I enjoyed this track a lot, good job guys...

but is it me or does the beat sound like a rip off of the Welcome To D Block beat by Eminem? lol

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the feed mart. the beat reminds me of the d-block one too.