[New] Bar - Feel & Think (Preview)

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

ok so when killa and others mentioned about me posting stuff i been rpacticing but not actually any written verse material, i agreed lol , so this is a preview of 1 Of My EP's Im working on Called "Feel & Think" , named it that coz thats what hip hop is, anything sayed on a mic is becuase you feel strongly about it or coz you think it needs to be said.

this is what youd call the track summing up the EP, although it is only a preview so you may think a concept isnt there, it is , the first verse is explaining how and what it feels like when we dont say what we feel, the second and third verses are ellaborating alot thurther into it (although this only has the first verse on it)


This Track will be re-recorded and properly mixed before its finished, so in all aspects this is a preview

http://www.zshare.net/audio/476912741c27f4/


feedback is always apreciated

[HAYZI]

as always i love ur work lyrically but uve still got sum work to do on flow and delivery, the ad libs are off in the chorus so ud need to fix that before this wet on a tape, but this is good stuff man keep workin

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

as always i love ur work lyrically but uve still got sum work to do on flow and delivery, the ad libs are off in the chorus so ud need to fix that before this wet on a tape, but this is good stuff man keep workin

thanx man

and yeh the mixing is balls ill have all that fixed, and ill work on delivery when i re-record it n also try tighten up the flow

[Vettori]

haha nice lyrics, I fel if there Said just right, and Spit properly this can be a sick track...

Beat goes along way with this, It's actually pretty sick, lol i couldnt help But Make my own chorus up as it was playing, and i can Murder a chorus on this Lol....haha anyways Mainly what hayzi said was What i agree with Keep Gettin better :P

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

haha nice lyrics, I fel if there Said just right, and Spit properly this can be a sick track...

Beat goes along way with this, It's actually pretty sick, lol i couldnt help But Make my own chorus up as it was playing, and i can Murder a chorus on this Lol....haha anyways Mainly what hayzi said was What i agree with Keep Gettin better :P

hey if your up fpr spitting the hook you got yourself a ft on it lol

i just wrote the hook to flow while i was writing

i can send over the beat if you want

and thx for the feedback i still got to work on spitting more rhymes properly i got so used to the same style of rhyming its hard to adapt lol

[Vettori]

I would love to, only thing is i dont know when your deadline for dropping it will be...Ill tell ya what...send me the beat or w/e and ill try get it done soon...and stick with the chorus you have and if im able to get it done before the deadline ill send it to ya :P...But if not just carry on

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

I would love to, only thing is i dont know when your deadline for dropping it will be...Ill tell ya what...send me the beat or w/e and ill try get it done soon...and stick with the chorus you have and if im able to get it done before the deadline ill send it to ya :P...But if not just carry on

there aint a deadline, i wrote this verse yesterday and recorded it today, so i aint in no rush, plus i still need to finish the other verses n stuff

but kool, if it gets to a point i need it done ill have my hook to fall back on so its all good

got the beat uploading ill pm you the link once its finished

[B.A.D.]

wahuu nice lyrics from what I heard

beat is crazy, VTZ ain't it?... fits your style 100%
its a preview so I don't care about the quality

just make sure on the final version you make the volume louder

killer track man, enjoyed this... when u have the final send it to me so I can put it in my mp3

[bg_pop]

Well I can say only one think


IT'S GREAT AND WHEN IT WILL BE RERECORDED WILL BE THE GREATEST

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yea its a nice track...lyrics great again... hmm delievery wasnt that much of a problem fo me
but yes mixin is fucked...but since i cant do it better lol
and wut killa said about the ad-libs..u gotta fix that

[mart85]

yeah hayzi summed it up well nice track, has a lot of potential, just needs a little more work/practise with the delivery and the flow and it will be hot keep it up man

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

^ thx ya'll

and yeh, now that its been a day i listened again and noticed stuff i badly fucked up

so itll defiantly be worked on before the final mix

[randomghost]

crazy lyrics...hot beat....that is some good shit bro...i really liked it....and lookin forward to hear the ep

[soperman005]

yo that was pretty deep. i liked it but words were kinda soft so i had to rilly listen to understand what you were saying.

[C-Game]

im not sure if this is mastered
if so .. den its a not so good job mate
the chorus needs a vocal lift up..
and a vocal equalization.. booost the trebles and da mids a litlle

ur lyrics were quality
flow was oki ..fix wat i said and this can be a great song...