Fergie-Clumsy Ft DQ

[DelinQuent]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=6130869

i'm on the first two verses, i tried a different flow for this song and i love it. tell me what you think. thanks

[DelinQuent]

LYRICS
Verse 1-first time i saw ya, i knew you was the shit/
second time i saw ya, i knew you was legit/
if ya could if ya would, would you be my chick/
ya should see i'm good, you be good with me/
if you'd open your eyes, then you would see/
life isn't life, living in monotony/
leave dat boy, you could be a part of me/
so sprung so crazy, that's what you've gotten me/
so hold on dear, i'm comin to your rescue/
you know me yeah, i would give the best to/
you if you want it, so come on baby/
i give ya errythang, if you be my lady/
i would do anythang, girl you got me so crazy/
and i ain't felt this way, no not lately/
girl you know the deal, i ain't takin maybe/
promise to be honest, i never be shady/

verse 2-butterflies in my stomach, everytime you come around/
but the way that we click, it as if we was bound/
don't act like you don't know, girl you know i treat you good/
say i don't know ya, but i got you understood/
girl why you play yaself, just leave that lame/
argue all the time, seems you lost that flame/
steady unhappy, girl you should be ashamed/
come on with me baby, say my name/

[Speech]

it's aaite...hmm didn like it too much tho...the concepts is cool(well girls whatever lmao), lyrics simple but fit the concepts...you didn mess up so it's still cool...i never heard the original and i'm not hyped to hear it cuz i need some rappin to it hahaha so your version is prolly the only one i wanna hear with beat....speakin of the beat...omg pretty fucked up i think..sounds like a lady sov. joint eeeww please don us those beats again buddy

oh well 7.5 / 10 nothing special but it was worth listening

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the feed. i personally liked it a lot lol. i guess it's difference of opinion which is always good to hear. i liked it cause it's far from my norm. thanks a lot tho, i really do appreciate it.

[B.A.D.]

first thing I've gotta say: better than the original lol

I don't have much time but I'll give ya feed, the flow is diferents but cool, I loved that style, the first verse was better, I personally don't like the beat, but the remix fits real real nize, lol fergie haha, the quality is good but for a strange reason is not as good as some otha tracks I've heard from ya

nice remix man

[DelinQuent]

good lookin on the feed. yeah i hate the beat too. i couldn't tell you anything about the quality, sounded the same to me lol.
thanks for the feed. more is appreciated