AwMe, DieN2LivE - "See Me Ridin'"

[DieN2LivE]

Only feed my verse,if you'd like
Any feed you give me, Will be returned ASAP!

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[Intro]
Niggaz hate it when we talkin' in tha intro'z...
Buh we don't give a f*** do we DieN?
Niggah... I Don't... We Don't give a f*** at all, Niggah...
F*** Them Niggaz... Ayo... AwMe...
Ridin' Wit' Ma DieN fo' thiz one...
Ya'll can see us ridin'... I know ya'll see us, Niggah...
Ayo... Letz Git It!

[Verse 1 ; AwMe]
So Ahead of Ma Own Game, Work A Ho On Fixed Ratez! (Ahah!)
Produced Ma 2nd Album - Still Ain't Drop Ma Mix-Tape! (Word!?!) // 1
Handled All Tha Issues, Paper Told Ma Fate, (AwwwMeee!)
Gon' Make It Or Jail, No Bail, Check His Face! (Bitch Ass Niggaz!) // 2
Like 'Nah, F*** That!' I'mma ride wit' ma niggaz, (Die Fo' Ma Niggaz!)
Puttin' handz on ma triggaz, While I stack dem figgaz, (Stackin'!) // 3
'N dem kidz gon' hate, I'mma back down they way,
'N dem ho'z gon' wait, I'mma back down ma way! (Know What It Iz!) // 4
Erybody wanna problem, So bulletz ta tha face,
Nobody gonna stop'em, Thang up on ma waist! (Mac-10, It Iz!) // 5
'N if tha cops wanna stop, We can shoot it out, (Ball Em out!)
Produce tha whole block, Got'cha gurl movin' out! (Think About It!) // 6
Chi-Boy, Bus'in' Em - Tha Shells Greyhound, (Bus'in Em Muhf***az!)
Top Boy, Uppin' Em - So Put'Cha Face Down! (Do It!) // 7
Own Tha Hood 'N Tha Lounge, Like A Ball Goin' Round,
See Me Around, Wit' Tha Sound, Where You Muthaf***az Bound! (Ayo!) // 8

[Hook x2 ; AwMe]
If Wanna See Me, I'm Swervin' In Tha Lanez,
They Wanna See Me - Cuz I'm Betta Than Tha Lamez! //
'N I'm Buildin' Up Ma Fame, I'm Buildin' Up Ma Game!
You Can See Me Ridin', I'm Goin' Insane! (I'm Goin' Insane!) //

If Wanna See Me, I'm Swervin' In Tha Lanez,
They Wanna See Me Cuz I'm Betta Than Tha Lamez! //
'N I'm Buildin' Up Ma Fame, I'm Buildin' Up Ma Game!
You Can See Me Ridin', I'm Goin' Insane! (I'm Goin' Insane!) //

[Verse 2 ; DieN2Live]
I'm better than these "veterans," n' givin' 'em a lesson with
the sickest trend-setting scripts, I'm killin' what they set as "sick"
never one to tamper with, takin' out there managment
I'm givin' what I'm givin' and what I'm givin' is damagin'!
the game's at stake, I figure I'm the best
when I realized that my flow was so sicker than the rest
givin' em what's left, then I hit 'em in the chest
I'll make sure that I'm never-ever givin' 'em a breath
never had a gun unless we talkin' 'bout my fricken' throat
"the barrell" when I spit it goes [gunshot] and takes your hope
use my tounge in intervals, for timin' like I pull it
so when I breath I cock it back, syliva is the bullet
DieN's commin' through, and he commin'-in t kill the game
peasents with the power of the little kiddy Lil Wayne
show me that you spit insane, leave you sit in fear in silence
everbody backin' up, whenever they gon' see me ridin'


[Hook x2 ; AwMe]
If Wanna See Me, I'm Swervin' In Tha Lanez,
They Wanna See Me - Cuz I'm Betta Than Tha Lamez! //
'N I'm Buildin' Up Ma Fame, I'm Buildin' Up Ma Game!
You Can See Me Ridin', I'm Goin' Insane! (I'm Goin' Insane!) //

If Wanna See Me, I'm Swervin' In Tha Lanez,
They Wanna See Me Cuz I'm Betta Than Tha Lamez! //
'N I'm Buildin' Up Ma Fame, I'm Buildin' Up Ma Game!
You Can See Me Ridin', I'm Goin' Insane! (I'm Goin' Insane!) //

[lil_bayly]

well i listened to it and this is wat i figure:


The beat is a little boring, not something i could bump my head to, the chorus wasn't as strong as i thought it could be, the lyrics are alright, the flow was ok, the second verse spitter was good, i liked his shit, overall mark if it was outta 10 i'd hand u a 6. Keep ay it tho, i can tell ya'll have some raw flow.

[DieN2LivE]

Thank you both

I haven't been rapping too long, so this is a good start.
Flow I had really hard time on, but it comes easy for me now

Thanks ya'll!!

Glad to know I outshined that dude hahah

Uppin!