nameless mpyre (sample)

[M-Pyre]

I'm back with yet anotha sample of some shit that I have bin creating lately.

it's called nameless, it's a song that I've wrote about 3 years ago.

once again:
I produced it
I wrote it
I rapped it
I recorded it

here is the link:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/81424276c9262b/

lyrics:
I will probably die nameless, silently miles away from any citation/
Props, and famous hot names, embracing life with a big cherry on top of my anus/
‘Look maby’ I just wanna eat life with a big spoon, and try to have a hit soon/
Not blending in, in midschool ‘good gracious’ I’m like a pitbull/
Trying to fit in this fool, like a pissed misunderstood kid, with pistols/
‘But I’ve stood waiting’ to finally say the things, I can finally say today/
No hiding away, cause they will be, finally facing me/
An idiotic psychotic, debating logic, like it’s an non hated product, by today’s modern projects/
Sucking our “good for nothing” wallets clean dry, from penny’s to dollars/
To the last wondering butterfly/


plz leave some feed, cause I'm trying to make an album, and I need to know what has potential en what does not.

and just ask me if you need feed on your shit, cause I'll gladly give you some then!

so feed me people, I'm hungry!!

[mctworm]

it does sound to classic. Other than that, it's okay, just the beat sounds to... uh... weirdish

[Kez]

Good wordplay on your name

Beat's alright, pretty good actually
Well your vocals are louder, and the layovers sound good
Your delivery's good as well, you sound more confident
Your flow is alright for the most part, the bit where you suddenly start rappin fast sounds wrong though, you garble your words. If you're gonna try to rap fast the idea is to make it as clear as you can, and there you slurred a few words. Other than that, nice.
Lyrics are pretty nice too , some nice lines there
Your quality mic-wise is good

I think now you need to stop making 1 minute long tracks and ending them abruptly, you need to actually start creating tracks that mean something, you know?

And as for what you can feed, you should download and feed Ax-D's new album THE GOLDEN AGE You'll see it quick if you look in audio stage...

[M-Pyre]

Good wordplay on your name

Beat's alright, pretty good actually
Well your vocals are louder, and the layovers sound good
Your delivery's good as well, you sound more confident
Your flow is alright for the most part, the bit where you suddenly start rappin fast sounds wrong though, you garble your words. If you're gonna try to rap fast the idea is to make it as clear as you can, and there you slurred a few words. Other than that, nice.
Lyrics are pretty nice too , some nice lines there
Your quality mic-wise is good

I think now you need to stop making 1 minute long tracks and ending them abruptly, you need to actually start creating tracks that mean something, you know?

And as for what you can feed, you should download and feed Ax-D's new album THE GOLDEN AGE You'll see it quick if you look in audio stage...

so you like my wordplay huh anyways

thats some nice constructive feedback you gave me there

and I already had downloaded the album, just haven't had the time to give some good feedback.
but I will, tomorrow after school!

and mctworm, thnks for your feed to, all tough its..I dono weirdish

but in the meantime, feed me