
http://www.zshare.net/audio/80928819f3a9dd/
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:beat is terrible.at the start you completely change the words to rhyme "cisual ?" lolyou flow over the beat i guess, but i mean the beat doesnt even have a flow loldidnt enjoy the chorus. fast spitting sounded aritificaly done but if it wasnt then nice speed.lyrically its bad but its a club track so i guess thats ok.aint my type of track so cant say i enjoyed it
M-Pyre wrote:the beat is good, I just didn't like that digitalized sound in the background!overall very jumpy and fast.ya lyrics were good for a club track, above average imoya flow was good to, I actually like it when you speed it up a notch, you got that shit downbtw are you American or British?your voice is something you could listen to..for a minute or two, maby it's the track, but idk your voice..sometimes I just couldn't understand you, you could work on thatand for the rest, just keep it up, cause this shit is (pretty) good quality.peace..........of cake
KillahGoat wrote:Ain't really my type of track, but I can't say you're bad on it! You did really good imo! Keep it up man!
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
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