New Track (One I Actually Did Good On)

[lil_bayly]

haha omg dude??? wtf man, serious tho, this is how ill critique u like i was Simon Cowell from american idol




What the bloody hell was that? If the world gave justice it should gravitationaaly pull u away from any type of beat or microphone!! It was ghastly!!! U have not even 1 once of "flow" potential and the lyrics sound like as if they were written by a 4 year old. And most of it didnt make any sense. It was a pathectic attempt at a pathectic attempt...

[lil_bayly]

This forum callz me a bitch? Thats cool. half the faggots on this site are just that anyways FAGGOTS. And dont hate cause u cant spit or write, u wanted feedback so thats i gave u stupid. I reccomend sticking to internet dating!!!!!

[Tash8]

work on your lyrics their awful, flow is choppy, your quality def. needs improvement... concept is horrible./..

[Tash8]

you are improving

soo keep it up

i suggest u get a mic

[Crossova16]

this shit was hrrible bro... no offence but ur flow was horrible and ur mic suckss... da beat is sickk th0ugh...

try to actually flow on the beat.... lyrics werent bad though...

keep trying bro

[mctworm]

yo chet! Dont listen to those douches (lil bayly), yo shit was like that houston texas paul wall shit, i liked it. And i aint lying

[mctworm]

alright... it's your song, not mine. But dont listen to lil bayly, he's fucking retarded

[threeandtwenty]

you aint bad bro...ive tried rapping and it's not easy.a mic makes a difference because it gives your voice that power,and you should try clearer pronunciation...like swallow all the spit in your mouth 'fore you start.