
Tash8 wrote:not sure who made the beat, but not me
NoN-Stop wrote:Here it goes:
Beat: Damn. I love it! Really nice beat![]()
Kez: Really good verse, dope lyrics and nice flow![]()
Tash: Nice chorusYou did good on this.
Bar: Nice verse, I don't care about ur accent, I like it. Nice lyrics
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Sajjad: Nice verse, like the singin thing![]()
Dope track![]()
Got nothing wrong to say, I think
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:thanx for the feed everyonereally aprecaite the feedbakc and comments
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oh and @ chet, you mentioned about anger in the verses, the name of this track (taking action) wasnt what it was originaly called, and it sorta gives you the impression that is should be like taking action, when i was given the beat hook and stuff i was under the impression this wasnt a highly energetic/angry song lol so i dunno if its just came along a different way there
oh and about accents, its starting to piss me off how much americans and ppl from other countries bring this up so imma lay it down straight
c-riz mentions accent alot, German accent = gay as fuck to me
americans mentions accent alot, american accent = tired out, boring, and was never that good to start with
and for the record
canadian accent = weird but not actually that bad
australian accent = seems out of depth when recorded, but again not actually that bad
irish accent = weirdest accent ive ever heard rap, but i still listen to like 5 irish rappers who are lyricaly dope and skillfull as fuck
welsh accent = gay normaly but i never heard a welsh rapper
english accent = seems posh whent spoken properly but when in rap, sounds dope as fuck
scottish accent = awesome when in dark raps, weird when trying to deliver a lighter verse, but can work when did correctly
mexican accent = sounds slick at times, and weird at others
russian accent = dopest accent i heard in rap (when there rapping english like asp) dunno why i like it i just do.
french accent = sounds funny over hip hop, never heard french in english but french in french is like i said funny at first but really good sounding when you take time to get used to it
so every accent sounds different to every person and hardly anyone likes an accent that isnt there own (expect for liverpool accents there fucking dope and everyone loves them!)
so see this whole accent hate thing about 7 members have got going on fucking stop it coz chances are (imma use uk as an example since we get the most stick) when you say you dont like UK accents, we probly dont like yours either but here's the thing, we aint shallow enough to point it out everytime so even though we are nice enough not to mention it doesnt mean we love the accent, we just know that if we listen to it a couple of times we'll get used to it, like what you got to do to get used to any accent.
Speech wrote:the ppl that talk about other accents, don mean that their own is the best...most of them are not used to other accents..and thatz the deal...
Vettori wrote:beat was good, Overall i liked it, but u guys seem like u get lazy when recording, i dunno if the quality dims it, but i think u can deliver way better...considering this was a group effort You should have sounded like u were working together, but seemed like u guys were on differant pages, lyrics i liked..but the biggest flaw was definatly ur delivery.. all of u...u guys are underated as artists and i feel thats the reason why.... start bringing it guys i know u can do better
Speech wrote:,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:thanx for the feed everyonereally aprecaite the feedbakc and comments
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oh and @ chet, you mentioned about anger in the verses, the name of this track (taking action) wasnt what it was originaly called, and it sorta gives you the impression that is should be like taking action, when i was given the beat hook and stuff i was under the impression this wasnt a highly energetic/angry song lol so i dunno if its just came along a different way there
oh and about accents, its starting to piss me off how much americans and ppl from other countries bring this up so imma lay it down straight
c-riz mentions accent alot, German accent = gay as fuck to me
americans mentions accent alot, american accent = tired out, boring, and was never that good to start with
and for the record
canadian accent = weird but not actually that bad
australian accent = seems out of depth when recorded, but again not actually that bad
irish accent = weirdest accent ive ever heard rap, but i still listen to like 5 irish rappers who are lyricaly dope and skillfull as fuck
welsh accent = gay normaly but i never heard a welsh rapper
english accent = seems posh whent spoken properly but when in rap, sounds dope as fuck
scottish accent = awesome when in dark raps, weird when trying to deliver a lighter verse, but can work when did correctly
mexican accent = sounds slick at times, and weird at others
russian accent = dopest accent i heard in rap (when there rapping english like asp) dunno why i like it i just do.
french accent = sounds funny over hip hop, never heard french in english but french in french is like i said funny at first but really good sounding when you take time to get used to it
so every accent sounds different to every person and hardly anyone likes an accent that isnt there own (expect for liverpool accents there fucking dope and everyone loves them!)
so see this whole accent hate thing about 7 members have got going on fucking stop it coz chances are (imma use uk as an example since we get the most stick) when you say you dont like UK accents, we probly dont like yours either but here's the thing, we aint shallow enough to point it out everytime so even though we are nice enough not to mention it doesnt mean we love the accent, we just know that if we listen to it a couple of times we'll get used to it, like what you got to do to get used to any accent.
da fuck is up with that accent shit..everybody likes and dislikes any accent..but thatz not to focus on...i mean..when i say shit about an accent(kez for example) i don mean hating..it's hard for me to get used to that(which happened, that last track kez was on, he killed the whole track) btw sorry kez for using you as an example
@ bar : for talking about any accent and breaking shit down, your not better than the accent haters![]()
your saying "that accent is broing, that accent is brilliant"...you doing the same shit as anybody else...and lol...germans have accents? i mean you can't call it accent when somebody speaks a langueage he hardly knows...i wouldn say thatz an accent...i take accents as for british or australian ppl(cuz they speak english)..but with germans...i wouldn call that an accent..it's just lack in pronounciation(if you can call it "lack" exactly haha)
same goes for russian ppl or french men...haha...i didnt notice there was accent haters till you ppl started all that...look at me..i'm half german...but i hate german rappers..just don't like that shit..i don like spitten rhymes with the accent i speak, it is whut it is...so the ppl that talk about other accents, don mean that their own is the best...most of them are not used to other accents..and thatz the deal...btw *sucks australian / iraqy dick for talkin bout accents * haha
Vettori wrote:beat was good, Overall i liked it, but u guys seem like u get lazy when recording, i dunno if the quality dims it, but i think u can deliver way better...considering this was a group effort You should have sounded like u were working together, but seemed like u guys were on differant pages, lyrics i liked..but the biggest flaw was definatly ur delivery.. all of u...u guys are underated as artists and i feel thats the reason why.... start bringing it guys i know u can do better
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:Speech wrote:,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:thanx for the feed everyonereally aprecaite the feedbakc and comments
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oh and @ chet, you mentioned about anger in the verses, the name of this track (taking action) wasnt what it was originaly called, and it sorta gives you the impression that is should be like taking action, when i was given the beat hook and stuff i was under the impression this wasnt a highly energetic/angry song lol so i dunno if its just came along a different way there
oh and about accents, its starting to piss me off how much americans and ppl from other countries bring this up so imma lay it down straight
c-riz mentions accent alot, German accent = gay as fuck to me
americans mentions accent alot, american accent = tired out, boring, and was never that good to start with
and for the record
canadian accent = weird but not actually that bad
australian accent = seems out of depth when recorded, but again not actually that bad
irish accent = weirdest accent ive ever heard rap, but i still listen to like 5 irish rappers who are lyricaly dope and skillfull as fuck
welsh accent = gay normaly but i never heard a welsh rapper
english accent = seems posh whent spoken properly but when in rap, sounds dope as fuck
scottish accent = awesome when in dark raps, weird when trying to deliver a lighter verse, but can work when did correctly
mexican accent = sounds slick at times, and weird at others
russian accent = dopest accent i heard in rap (when there rapping english like asp) dunno why i like it i just do.
french accent = sounds funny over hip hop, never heard french in english but french in french is like i said funny at first but really good sounding when you take time to get used to it
so every accent sounds different to every person and hardly anyone likes an accent that isnt there own (expect for liverpool accents there fucking dope and everyone loves them!)
so see this whole accent hate thing about 7 members have got going on fucking stop it coz chances are (imma use uk as an example since we get the most stick) when you say you dont like UK accents, we probly dont like yours either but here's the thing, we aint shallow enough to point it out everytime so even though we are nice enough not to mention it doesnt mean we love the accent, we just know that if we listen to it a couple of times we'll get used to it, like what you got to do to get used to any accent.
da fuck is up with that accent shit..everybody likes and dislikes any accent..but thatz not to focus on...i mean..when i say shit about an accent(kez for example) i don mean hating..it's hard for me to get used to that(which happened, that last track kez was on, he killed the whole track) btw sorry kez for using you as an example
@ bar : for talking about any accent and breaking shit down, your not better than the accent haters![]()
your saying "that accent is broing, that accent is brilliant"...you doing the same shit as anybody else...and lol...germans have accents? i mean you can't call it accent when somebody speaks a langueage he hardly knows...i wouldn say thatz an accent...i take accents as for british or australian ppl(cuz they speak english)..but with germans...i wouldn call that an accent..it's just lack in pronounciation(if you can call it "lack" exactly haha)
same goes for russian ppl or french men...haha...i didnt notice there was accent haters till you ppl started all that...look at me..i'm half german...but i hate german rappers..just don't like that shit..i don like spitten rhymes with the accent i speak, it is whut it is...so the ppl that talk about other accents, don mean that their own is the best...most of them are not used to other accents..and thatz the deal...btw *sucks australian / iraqy dick for talkin bout accents * haha
youve completely mis-read what i was saying. my whole point was that every accent sounds different and weird if your not from there, sometimes even when you are form there (if you didnt read it all i did say scottish accents were weird when spitting non-dark verses) and that if you listen to a new accent with a open mind you get used to it so there's no point in hating on accents coz your own accent sounds weird to everyone else.
re-read what i said coz i aint explaining it all, i am in no way a accent hater, i dont even mention accents in rap coz like i said after 2 songs im used to it, maybe coz im open minded to anything and i will give a guy a listen a couple of times even if he sounded like mickey mouse lol
Vettori wrote:beat was good, Overall i liked it, but u guys seem like u get lazy when recording, i dunno if the quality dims it, but i think u can deliver way better...considering this was a group effort You should have sounded like u were working together, but seemed like u guys were on differant pages, lyrics i liked..but the biggest flaw was definatly ur delivery.. all of u...u guys are underated as artists and i feel thats the reason why.... start bringing it guys i know u can do better
lol im not in there groupand yeh, i agree with you, although i also feel quality has alot to do with delivery aswell, like the reverb on my verse doesnt give the intesnsity it does when its a raw verse
as in when say, mart85 mixes my verse my delivery doesnt lose any of the emotion it had during the raw recording
sorry i feel like im making excuses, im not, but i do feel that its a factor along with the obvious that it just didnt have as good a delivery as it could have. its the flaw in internet collabing, in a studio you got the producer right there to tell you to do it again coz it needed better emotion ect. as in when you record yourself i dunno but i find it hard to judge my own recordings lol
Tash8 wrote:bar, i dunno what ur talking about, but ur verse's emotion in raw seems the same in the mixed...
anyways thx everyone for feed
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