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NEW TRACK!!! - 1 Day In New York

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NEW TRACK!!! - 1 Day In New York

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 7th, '08, 21:38

Track- One Day In New York
Artist- Rain Matrix
Album- In Progress
File Type- MP3
Link- one day in new york.mp3 - 3.97MB
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Re: NEW TRACK!!! - 1 Day In New York

Postby Kez » Mar 8th, '08, 00:20

Rhymes and lyrics are pretty amazin :y:
Your quality is decent, pops a few times
Delivery and flow is a bit better but still sounds a bit too quiet-ish.
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Re: NEW TRACK!!! - 1 Day In New York

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 8th, '08, 00:44

ok I'll try to get on it... as far tha volume ... I'll get it toned up soon

freestyles are recording and I'm writing some new stuff

I'll have more tracks coming :smoking:

3rd verse was fire... tha rest was there and placed well :smoking: :smoking:
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Re: NEW TRACK!!! - 1 Day In New York

Postby Speech » Mar 8th, '08, 23:38

like kez said...lyrics were amazing..for real...quality is cool too..but delivery wasn damn near tight....didn flow with the beat...plus turn the beat up just a tiny bit, makes ppl(me :unsure: ) feel what your spitting...make sure you really "float" with that beat homie

other than that..this was ok..oh and if you have some grimey rhymes, rap em grimey :y:
keep it up, do even better
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Re: NEW TRACK!!! - 1 Day In New York

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 13th, '08, 05:36

first I gotta say, the title of the track is hot

the flow is diferent, not used too this lol

the lyrics and plays are extremely good, ur writing is perfect, all you gotta do now is get the audio in a bigger level.

try fixin ur quality a bit, its good but can be better... find a flow that suits the beat, lyrics are great no problem on that, too good,

most of all, add ur emotion to it

but def, tight thang
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