by <Stiiccy> » Mar 28th, '08, 05:09
love the beat...
i dont like your voice...you need to put more emotion into your shit...
the lyrics were there and werent bad at all...
your flow was ok wasnt that bad,
your quality sucks..you popped like 10 times..
over all you need to re-do it and come back with more emotion and delivery...
if you do that you may have somthin...ill give that verse 5/10 for now
if you come back with some emotion...it can be atleast a 7.5/10
keep at it homie
Sticcy ZPrison in Febuary, i don't give no fuckkssss
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