beat was cool..nothing special but for a freestyle beat great...hmm...your flow is bad no hate...do more rappin than talkin...matter a fact this didn flow at all..didn hear your other stuff but you have my bless if you improved...do more flowing and "floating" to the beat before you start to make a demo...cuz if you show that around i'm sure ppl won't listen to more than 2 or 3 trax...
lyrics where ok tho..nothing to complain
just your flow thing..plus the poor quality draws your performance down
hmm improve and stick to it
peace