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[Emadyville]

Check out my new single "Superstar" at http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch Feedback appreciated, thank you all.

[<Stiiccy>]

i dont like your voice...you dont have enough emotion...
you used a faggot ass beat beat...(although lupe killed it)
your flow was choppy wasnt bad though...
i give it a 5/10
i hope i wasnt to harsh...but it sounds like you have potential...keep at it..

[Emadyville]

No yo criticism always helps, and my voice doesn't do my lyrics justice on most songs i do. Haha so for everyone who listens i apologize about my voice, just try to pay attention to the lyrics.

[<Stiiccy>]

No yo criticism always helps, and my voice doesn't do my lyrics justice on most songs i do. Haha so for everyone who listens i apologize about my voice, just try to pay attention to the lyrics.

your lyrics are good..ill give you that...but just put more emotion..and try not to sound like your talking over a beat..

[Emadyville]

Well did you listen to Moment of Clarity on there? Let me know what you thought of that one.

[B.A.D.]

well, can't deny the message its good

the lyrics are good in the way u can listen to the concept, but you need to up your vocal

quality is good, but mixing is bad (the effects process & volumes)

but overall its a pretti decent track

one thing I do hate is the use of comercial beats or "famous" tracks or whatever... u should dig out soundclick...

I'm a producer too, so I can hit u up with a beat. but don't use famous beats, or beats who belong to major artists.... that's just my advice...

anyways, bumpin this

[Speech]

post it on zshare and I'll listen to it

hahahahaha damn stop bein a bitch bout this, i understand your reason, the "myspace is slow for me" - thing....but uhm you hate to give ppl listens? must be one sorry myspace member..hahaha sorry i had to let it out since you say that in almost every thread where trax is posted

ok...back on track


i don't think the whole song missed emotions...just most of it...yeah the beat is gay..i hate it haha...specially that gay ass motherfucker singin in the chorus...what was lupe thinkin? oh well fuck it..uhm....yeah true, lyrics was aaaaall there for me..just a nicer performance would have ripped this apart...so work on that and you be cool...cuz potential is there deffo.

[MesAyah]

first off, teh voice, is taht your natural voice, it seemed pushed, therefore it sounds thin, i dont like that, lyric wise its aight, some lines are to simple for me, put others get to me
Atack the mic, dont defend yourself against it

aight drop 4/10