Fallin (Song)

[Emadyville]

I had my lyrics up before, now you can all listen. Feedback is needed and wanted, also check out Jimmy Crack Corn with myself and DQ. Thanks!!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/109045328ca64ea7/

[Emadyville]

Yes

[Kez]

I shall check this out after I eat my Ramen

Lmao

[Kez]

Wow this was pretty good

Some great multis and lyrics, best thing about the track
Good use of the "Falling" in the beat
Good beat and hook
Flow was pretty good too
Delivery needs improvement still sounds a bit fake/automatic
Concept is pretty good

[Kosovic]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Keeeep on faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalling
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND OUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT
Of loooove......
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NEEEEEEEEEEEVER LOVE SOMEOOOOOOOOOOOOOONE
With the heart.....of loviiiiiiiiiiing youuuuu.

Alicia rox.

[Emadyville]

Thanks for the feeds guys, and Chet I will remember that

[B.A.D.]

flow is great, really well done there... one of a kind bruh

you playing with the sample real real nice, matches perfect on ya style

quality is good for an unmixed track, when u get ur mastering great this will be top notch

the lyrics are good, kinda simple but its all good, the flow helped a lot on this

at the end of second verse you was starting to sound tired... try some breathin exercises

the first verse was the best... third was also hot

the flow on the first verse is real real sick man.... u got a great style... with little more practice you'll be one of the big fishes bruh... keep at it

[DelinQuent]

fucking rhymes are sick. flow is solid too. like someone else said working "falling" into your verse was good too. hook is decent. good track but lack of delivery brings you down. work on it.