New freestyle

[<VerbalTouch>]

Was just bored so i just put together a freestyle

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6565003

[<VerbalTouch>]

Well I don't think there were more then 2 words that rhymed in the whole thing

but it was just a freestyle, and I can just imagine how bad I would be at it too

ok ok it was just me talkin over beat exposed

But seriously I thought there was some rhymes in there

[-SiiNiDE-]

lol

[Ice_Scarred]

Its just ok. You need a bit of work, just like I do. You need to work on flow, delivery, and wordplay. If you can get a killer flow and hot rhymes, you would do good. So you definitely need to work on it a bit.

[<VerbalTouch>]

thanks everyone