Haunting Dreams Pt 2 DQ's Verse

[DelinQuent]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/122659529b59fdf7/

here's some non-love shit for you. this is a verse i did for DJBlue.

EDIT-this is all unmixed, no EQ, no nothing, just placed over the beat. apparently McMaybe is supposed to be mixing it or something.

Lyrics-if you want it i'ma bomb it harder than fuckin osama/
fuckin premadonna got a hard on and a problem/
i chew you like pihranna, i'ma animal on tracks/
if ya see my foot steps, you best just get back/
i don't growl i just bite, i will foul up ya night/
like a blind umpire, and i'm burn the world/
but won't set one fire, i'm the gas to your ignitor/
i'm an ass but i'm a fighter, steppin to me/
you walkin on a wire, like you workin in a circus/
beef is what i'm servin, yeah i be flippin burgers/
baby motherfucker, you should be eatin gerber's/
get up off my dick, dog i have you murdered/
and i will spill the blood of everyone that you love/
no i'm not a true thug, but i don't give a fuck/
what you fuckin label me, so come and say it b/
i don't even want this beef, i just want for you to leave/

[Kosovic]

Why do every rapper gotta use the bomb/osama simile?

[Emadyville]

The middle/ending was good DQ, can't wait to hear it mixed and put together and shit.

[DelinQuent]

ive actually never heard anyone use the bomb/osama line lmao. i'm sure someone else has used it cause it's a pretty obvious line

[Cwayon_Murder]

Nice to hear a non-love verse from you
Sounds good so far. Can't wait to hear it mixed.

[Purple23Haze]

That was alright it flowed pretty good but the rhyme scheme is played

[Tornado]

baby motherfucker, you should be eatin gerber's/

wots a gerber?
newayz lyrics were decent but flow, delievery and emotion were all there so i'd say a good jb...and sounded good for a unmixed verse

[B.A.D.]

Mafucka leave the chorus on the sample lol... the little 1 second I hurd sounded hot lol

anyways back to the verse

wow, flow is simply amazing excelent flow

delivery on the start was top of top

the lyrics also improved highly, sounded real fucking nice

def def when its mixed pm it to me, and if u need a verse for completing the track, halla bro

damn this sounds real fya!!!

good job on this, shame for the quality, but I'm really feelin this.... and the beat is excelent

[DelinQuent]

gerber's is a brand of baby food here in the states.

thanks everyone for the feedback.

i been trying to work on my flow more. i think i tend to sound the same from track to track so i tried to switch it up. about my lyrics, idk what i changed lol, but i agree, suddenly i see myself writing a little bit more complex.

[B.A.D.]

gerber's is a brand of baby food here in the states.

thanks everyone for the feedback.

i been trying to work on my flow more. i think i tend to sound the same from track to track so i tried to switch it up. about my lyrics, idk what i changed lol, but i agree, suddenly i see myself writing a little bit more complex.

word thats a good thing bro

really enjoyed this one, pm me when its mixed n stuff I wanna hear it with nice quality

[DelinQuent]

yeah i will. thanks again for the feed everyone.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Ayo i need the acapella sent to me again so mcmaybe can mix it