Life

[-SiiNiDE-]

This is a story from my childhood onto life itself. Posting mainly for critique on mixing (such as the second hook.. fucked up somehow). Any other comments are cool too, it's whatever.


http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6618420



All real, so i dont care what anyone says about the lyrics.

[-SiiNiDE-]

http://www.myspace.com/siinide

[Jay-19]

I like the concept of the song. The lyrics are really good, it says what you want to say, but I think your voice needs a little mixing, in my opinion it's a little high on the beat. The beat is awesome, you made it yourself? I love the hook with the singing in the background and your rapping over it.

Over all a really good track, 8,5/10!

[-SiiNiDE-]

Hey, thanks.. Yeah, I been listening to it over and over to see what I've did wrong and the first thing i noticed was the vocals were too loud. Thanks for reassuring my suspicion, lol.

I didnt make the beat, it's actually a SINIMA beat. I forgot to mention that. (Wish i could make beats like that lol)

[B.A.D.]

lol, the diss track on ya myspace hahaha

bout this track

damn, beat is hot, the quality of your verse improved hella bunch, good job on that

the hook I wasn't feelin it, I mean the lyrics and flow on it is good, but kinda timed unproperly

anyways, this one here is a great track, and real talkin on there. so def a good improvement from ya

this beat fits you perfectly, second verse was the best. I'm fuckin lovin the guitar solo at the end hahaha.

nice one

[-SiiNiDE-]

^^ there's alotta older shit on my myspace still the tape comes out, lol.

Thanks for the feed, i fell in love with the beat so i spit this quick on it, gotta re-record and get it perfect though lol.


thanks for the feed again.

[DelinQuent]

beats crazy, where you get this? wanna collabo on this? lol

i was really feelin this song. loved the flow, loved the rhymes, loved the concept. great track 9.5/10 personal enjoyment.

i felt the mixing was good.

[-SiiNiDE-]

Glad you enjoyed it, delinquent. Glad you enjoyed the mixing too, that's a first lol.

The beat is from soundclick.. sinima beats. I belive its http://www.soundclick.com/sinima or http://www.soundclick.com/sinimabeats << one or the other.

& yeah hit me up for a collabo if you want, we can work suttin out.

[Speech]

dunno why but your accent is funny even tho it sounds american...no offense i just think its funny..like you could do the synch. for a cartoon show..maybe beavis and butthead (or however that show is spelled)

lyrics matched the flow perfectly man...all i can say..mixin wasn the best but i could understand everything so i guess it done its job

tracks like that are on my top list to listen to...keep that work up

[theJFKshow]

I like it. You could be a little more lyrical.

[-SiiNiDE-]

dunno why but your accent is funny even tho it sounds american...no offense i just think its funny..like you could do the synch. for a cartoon show..maybe beavis and butthead (or however that show is spelled)

lyrics matched the flow perfectly man...all i can say..mixin wasn the best but i could understand everything so i guess it done its job

tracks like that are on my top list to listen to...keep that work up

I'm American, I dunno why it seems funny lol. Guess it's a mixture of city (Upstate new york, Albany) and really far upstate... lol. Thanks for the feed though, I'm glad you enjoyed it. & I agree about the mixing, everytime i hear it i find more flaws. I suck at mixing, lol.


@ slim-- Thanks for the feed. Being lyrical wasn't a concern on this track, as much as the message itself was.