Outta My Mind-Untouchablez

[Vettori]

That beat reminds me of one of the new newer britany spear songs lol. Im not one for CLubbish, or about girl songs, but aside from the concept Your deliverys getting better...Still feel like u can do better.

[DelinQuent]

club songs aren't my type of songs either but every now and again i get in the mood to do one. thanks for the feedback vet.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

only enjoyable thing was the hook..cuz of the catchy-ness
but to be honest i didnt feel the flow and lyrics ..sorry no hate
keep it up tho

[DelinQuent]

Thanks for the feed c-riz. Dont be sorry, I forgive you lol. I highly highly highly appreciate the honest feedback. Thanks everyone

[Darkblade44431]

Good flow, lol, lyrics dont matter cuz its a club song, but they're ok. Good chorus. Overall, really nice job on this track, however i think that the quality could use some work, i heard some fucked up quality parts especially with that one part of the beat. Just listen to it again if u dont know what i'm talking about. Keep it up man.
lol, i dont do love or/club songs.

[Boston]

well i dont like club songs, but this sounded good
flow was on point to me, quality wasnt bad
keep it up bro

[randomghost]

lovin the beat...hot lyrics from both..feelin the tarck...hot shit guys

[DelinQuent]

thanks for all the feedback.

I can't fix the quality of the beat because I'm not very good at mixing, I have very basic mixing skills. I'm sending this track with my friend to me mixed in a professional studio later tonight so the quality should improve.

Again I dont like club songs either, so dont expect another one from me for a long time lol

[-SiiNiDE-]

Hmm, this sounds exactly like one of em's club bangers haha. Nice production. it seemed like yall were TRYING for the tired sound, were you?

These aren't really my typa tracks, but the flow was nice and yall did what ya set out to do with it. So nice job here

[DelinQuent]

I guess my voice just sounds 'tired' lol thanks for the feedback everyone. I really do appreciate every opinion given

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

ok uhm, i dont like the style, i dont think you do it very good, i think pik does well but still not great.


id go in depth but in all honesty, its the problem with hip hop no creativity, silly simple beat with simplier lyrics, like its a supposedly club track..



you and pik are better than this, oh and to note for a club track you dont need to dumb it down or have no/gay context, they can be smart and catchy just got to try harder

[DelinQuent]

it's not dumbed down. all my lyrics are very simple.

i do agree with the creative aspect, this song is in no way creative. so thanks for the feedback guys.

[Kez]

Uh alright

Now i know this is just "a club track", but i loathe people dumbing down hip hop.

I mean it's the reason i never do club tracks in the first place.

Well the beat's alright i spose
DQ's flows are decent but you sound a bit out of breath durin the verses.
Lyrics obviously are pretty simple, typical context, to be honest i was bored.
The hook is passable, didn't grab my attention much.
Pik's verse is a bit better in terms of flow, but to me the lyrics and context are exactly the same: it's just "women, fuck me" basically. But Pik's flow is best thing about the track.
And the hook was off beat at the end, which also kinda ruined the ending of the track for me.

Apologies for the negative review but that's what i think of it, and i personally wouldn't just want feed saying "yo that was mint" over and over again

[DelinQuent]

kez, thank you for your honesty. i didn't think anyone would like it i just wanted feedback on what was negative and positive, which i have received. again, thank you to EVERYONE who posted feedback, i really do read every word and listen to what you have to say to try to fix it the next time.

not my best track, not nearly my best, wasnt meant to be. just a bouncy radio-friendly song. lol