Comin' Up (Remix)- Ice Killa

[Requiem]

Due to the requests that i show more emotion in my original posting. i have re-recorded it, hopefully with better emotions than my last attempt.
please let me know what you think of the re-up.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/169996239cfb5a4a/

[MoBrat]

thanks 4 the pm...emotion is much better then the last 1, sounds like ur got more energy n feel ur lyrics more but the mixing aint good, not sure if u know how 2 mix or if u just throw u vocals over the beat but ur quality isn't the best...first part of the chorus start of a bit slow but u do sound like u feel it more into it...ur making good progress keep at it

[Requiem]

thx for the feedback. glad i fixed up the emotion thing. i'm pretty much done with this song, cuz i'm currently working on another one. and i'll makes sure on my next track that it's mixed better, has good emotion, and i'll see if i can't up the quality too.

[<VerbalTouch>]

you had pretty good flow but your voice just sounds to younge for it right now lol

[Xray]

flow is pretty good man, emotion and delivery is also decent. beat was weird...but i gotta say you over shined your beat with your vocals dj blue said your voice sounds young, doesn't matter cause you are young can't expect a biggie voice when your only 15-17 right ?

lyrics are pretty good man, nice song besides the beat and chorus.

[Requiem]

thanks, man. 17 is about right. i didn't like the beat too much either, but it was easy to flow over, and let me put more focus on the lyrics. i recorded the chorus multiple times, didn't like the sound of it, so i just took the two best recordings, and meshed em together.
thanks for the feedback tho.

[Tornado]

chorus is weak and mixing dont sound right, your flow is a bit over the place but a better attempt second time round