[New] Bar - Kill [Preview]

[SajN]

It was hard to hear your vocals properly.. but that has already been pointed out.
But lyrics are sick

The beat sounded like something from Jedi Mind Tricks

[B.A.D.]

thank god you put the lyrics there haha
about the lyrics:
amazing, excelent rhymes and mets, opening line is sick, flow works a bit diferent to me, but still cool on the lyrcs... great stuff

the beat amazing

the mastering was terrible on this one. also its really really hard to understand cuz the volume was too low, and I have to pay extra attention to your accent so I can listen good., diferent from many of the other members I have a good ear to understand uk accent, so that's not the problem, but you do pronnounce some words really strange hahaha, other than that, just the mixing problem

also, you should start putting out complete songs (just a thought) cuz they are good

lyrics amazing...
overall, the track needs more work

[Boston]

besides the quality and some parts of the delivery this was good shit, nice flow to go along with the lyrics you got, but we'll the final version when it comes out and ill critique more, keep it up

and dont let other people try to bring you down, im sure your not though
keep it up bro
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feed the new track! lol

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice sample at the intro to buildup, though i thought it was a bit loud..your delievery was almost on point all the way through but i thought you coudl've been more aggressive with it but i'm looking forward to hearing the re-mixed version. I dont knw shit about mixing so i'll keep my mouth shut

good work

thanx man appreciate the feedback

I wont comment on the mixing bcos theres ppl here that know alot more about that than me.

Regarding only your performance and delivery I think this is forward progress - your not perfect but I would much rather battle the old bar than have to face an angry scotsman that likes to hit punchlines like he means them. I found the chorus abit simple and repetitive with no catchyness to it so if your still in the process of making this song I would suggest re-thinking it if your planning to do a big track.

safe hope this is somewhat useful.

thank man appreciate the feedback

It was hard to hear your vocals properly.. but that has already been pointed out.
But lyrics are sick

The beat sounded like something from Jedi Mind Tricks

appreciate the feedback, and its produced by 2 deep

thank god you put the lyrics there haha
about the lyrics:
amazing, excelent rhymes and mets, opening line is sick, flow works a bit diferent to me, but still cool on the lyrcs... great stuff

the beat amazing

the mastering was terrible on this one. also its really really hard to understand cuz the volume was too low, and I have to pay extra attention to your accent so I can listen good., diferent from many of the other members I have a good ear to understand uk accent, so that's not the problem, but you do pronnounce some words really strange hahaha, other than that, just the mixing problem

also, you should start putting out complete songs (just a thought) cuz they are good

lyrics amazing...
overall, the track needs more work

yeh i got to work on the mixing, i just suck at it on cool edit i cant get a gate on it so i got to try hard to stop peaking and pops, when a gate before i record on pro tools stops that happening, then the noise floor is really prominit in cool edit, but in pro tools i can add a EQ sweep and get that shit disapeared easily, i think its mart that says the best program is the one you know and i know nothing about cool edit even though i used it for so long and the easiest tasks becomes so dam hard lmao not making esxcuses i know i should try harder at it thanx for the feedback though man, appreciate it

besides the quality and some parts of the delivery this was good shit, nice flow to go along with the lyrics you got, but we'll the final version when it comes out and ill critique more, keep it up

and dont let other people try to bring you down, im sure your not though
keep it up bro
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feed the new track! lol

appreciate the feedback man and the encouragment ill make sure to check it tonight or tomorrow


also everyone saying about this being a small track, the others i did were actually long verses, this is just a verse from a track i wasnt sure about (with the way i approached the flow chorus ect.) so i decided to get some of it down and get opinions before finish writing and touching up the track, so unlike when you leave feedback and dont see the direct results on this track you will coz i posted it to get pushed in the right direction with it.