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Postby DelinQuent » Mar 5th, '07, 00:09

march 7th dq solo.mp3 - 3.92MB

a song about a girl. solo. feedback appreciated.

Lyrics:
Verse 1:She says that I
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Postby BLAHBLAHBLAH » Mar 5th, '07, 00:17

that was an awsome song :worship: :worship:

i loved the last verse and the chorus!!
I act like shit don't phase me
inside it drives me crazy
my insecurities could eat me alive!
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Postby aiden669 » Mar 5th, '07, 00:18

nicccce! :8)
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Postby DelinQuent » Mar 5th, '07, 03:43

thanks for the feedback guys. more is appreciated
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Postby DelinQuent » Mar 6th, '07, 03:40

i need feeeeeed lol
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Postby randomghost » Mar 6th, '07, 10:42

i liked it, good flow, and nice beat, keep up the good work :happy:
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Postby Global » Mar 6th, '07, 10:43

randomghost wrote:i liked it, good flow, and nice beat, keep up the good work :happy:
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Postby DelinQuent » Mar 6th, '07, 15:16

thanks
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Postby DelinQuent » Mar 9th, '07, 04:34

nobody else?
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Postby BaZZ » Mar 9th, '07, 04:36

Global wrote:
randomghost wrote:i liked it, good flow, and nice beat, keep up the good work :happy:


agree, good job
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Postby Xray » Mar 10th, '07, 12:33

Madd Song braaa liked evey part of it :worship:
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Postby DelinQuent » Mar 11th, '07, 00:35

thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 13th, '07, 19:14

sorry for late feed

typing while listening

first verses flow is good n on beat through it all, lyrics arenice deap, not lyrical but it doesnt need that, nice meaning flow and delivery

chorus is god aswell nice mixing nice feel to it good delivery and on point nice hook

second verse, again flow is great on beat, deep meaning better lyrics i think, nicely written, good verse again man

thrird verse, again real nice flow through out and on beat, againnice deap lrics and nicely written


overall: i really like the track flow and being able to cnect with it was my favourte things about it, good solid track man

again sorry for late feed i remembe looking but i busy then i forgot bout it lol
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Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 13th, '07, 19:18

good track man,lyrics and flow was all on point :)
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Postby DelinQuent » Mar 13th, '07, 19:25

thanks for the feed.
i don't try to be super lyrical, just to make something people can connect with. it's ncie to hear that you did.
thanks again.
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