move on (new link mixed by phantom) with lyrics

[stevethetruth]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/move-on-mp3-29u.html
The truth - Move on (mixed by phantom)

My life completely changed when I met you
You just appeared out of thin air from the blue
No matter what happened you always stayed around
To have fun joke and kid as we always did but now
You

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

like i said


you control your voice and flow alot better than any of your previous stuff

your lyrics are nice aswell and you blend the pella to beat very nicely

basically only tip i got is keep using the style you used on this track and just keep elevating on this flow and keep practicing to strengthen your voice and controling it

good work man

[stevethetruth]

thanks alot for the feed man

and i will continue to work on this voice and flow lol

[ThomasAguanis]

weirdish beat but I like it

flows good on this. lyrics have stepped up a whole lot too. And as bar said, you've voice sounds a lot better, it's more clear and you're projecting it better and pronouncing everything better. Nice track man, keep it up

[mart85]

yeah I agree, your voice sounds better, you stepped up your delivery, keep working on it, it's one of the most important thing

it's a nice track, good job... the only thing I didn't like is the sound lol... did you do the mono thing I talked to you about last time?

[stevethetruth]

thanks for the feedback guys

and mart lol i've come to the conculsion that i need a new mic


i'ma buy a better one during the summer since i have a second job now lol

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

thanks for the feedback guys

and mart lol i've come to the conculsion that i need a new mic


i'ma buy a better one during the summer since i have a second job now lol

if its your recording settings id tell you to talk to cocooa he set my mic for me ( well not litteraly but he did it through msn with me ) but so real or restlesswon would help you out maybe

[stevethetruth]

thanks for the feedback guys

and mart lol i've come to the conculsion that i need a new mic


i'ma buy a better one during the summer since i have a second job now lol

if its your recording settings id tell you to talk to cocooa he set my mic for me ( well not litteraly but he did it through msn with me ) but so real or restlesswon would help you out maybe

i'll probably try that once i get out of school lol thanks for the heads up

[mart85]

thanks for the feedback guys

and mart lol i've come to the conculsion that i need a new mic


i'ma buy a better one during the summer since i have a second job now lol

ok, but be careful, cause it might be a problem with your sound card or your computer, so maybe a new mic won't resolve your problem

[stevethetruth]

hmmmm true

i'ma try the mic on my desktop computer tomorrow then

[$0 R3@L]

erm defo better then your old shit.Flow seemed pretty tight,lyrics were ok,quality was well bad but acceptable...but what was the track about 3 listens and i still cant pick out a track concept.

[stevethetruth]

erm defo better then your old shit.Flow seemed pretty tight,lyrics were ok,quality was well bad but acceptable...but what was the track about 3 listens and i still cant pick out a track concept.

lol yeah i wrote the lines to vent
i got into a fight with one of my friends she was being retarded lol so this track was basically to her lol

idk the concept excatly lol

thanks for the feeback man and yeah my old shit was wack idk why i released it i embarrsed myself by doing that lol

[DC4952]

nice track lyrics were well done as well as delivery, the flow was pretty descent too. overall nice track and great work

[stevethetruth]

thanks a lot man

[stevethetruth]

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