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**NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

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**NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby Rapsoldier101 » Jun 4th, '07, 06:47

You Can check It Out @ http://www.myspace.com/pfclick (and if u can i would greatly appreciate it if u rate it)

And I Also Uploaded It To Zshare So Here It Is


lil m - ready for this prod. by mart85.mp3 - 8.66MB


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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 4th, '07, 12:50

wtf is up with your links ? evertime i click my come crashes :unsure:
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 4th, '07, 13:33

kool beat, not my favourite from mart, sounded really different style form what he usually does, still nice though i liked the drum pattern alot :y:


this is probly the best flow youve had man, and lyrics wise its nice, content and shit i aint a fan off, and you still got this weird persona round your songs, you dont control your voice any better than your other tracks, you need to work on that, and try stop the dirty south twang you often do it doesnt fit :sweating:


but kool track man, keep it up :y:
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jun 4th, '07, 13:59

umm the beat was very nice mart....diffrent from ur style :y:
and lil m ur flow was pretty good...
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby mart85 » Jun 4th, '07, 15:45

thanks for the comments on the beat... I think I prefer to hear that my beat sounded different than hearing that my beat was great :sweating: cause that's what I'm working on these days/weeks, making new type of beats that, hopefully, doesn't sound like any other beats that I made, or that anybody else made... but it's hard :(

altho this beat is a bit old and I thought it wasn't that different from my style, but my point of view is different on the things I do I guess :sweating:

and good job lil M on this, you had good flow/lyrics, after hearing your verses/hook a few times I was feeling it more and more... keep it up
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby Kez » Jun 4th, '07, 16:25

Definately your best song.

I liked the hook, and the verses actually were pretty good, i'm liking the concept. You have good flow too,
some pretty good multis.
And of course Mart's beat is hot as usual
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby bg_pop » Jun 4th, '07, 20:13

I hope that my opinion it's important so.... here it is
The beat Well I hear something different ;) The beat is hmm... interesting it's not my style But i can feel it and this is the main thing so The beat is 9/10
The flow I am glad that I can't understand the whole lyrics Well I don't like it :( How old are you man ? I hear some kid I hope it's not kid But For me this type of rapping is not my passion I hope you can rap better ? :) keep rapping :)and one more thing Can you tell me who is the boss of the rap because I couldun't understand the lyrics If you can please post them here 10x
And once again Good job :) :worship:
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby Rapsoldier101 » Jun 4th, '07, 21:43

thanks for the oppinions and the tips and advice, i deffinently take everything u guys say under consideration
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby Tash8 » Jun 4th, '07, 21:46

your lyrics, flow, and shit are up to beat

so stop working on those for a bit and start working on controlling your voice, search google search wikipedia for help IDK, but if you ever wanna be something then learn that

no matter how good you maybe lyrically, your never gonna amount to shit if you got an annoying voice...

sorry for always pointing that out, but it doesn't sound like your trying to fix that man

anyways, like always nice lyrics and flow
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby die2nite » Jun 5th, '07, 02:08

Hate the voice but oh well. Flow is nice, lyrics are pretty good, second verse was killer. Hook is basic and catchy, I like it. But yea honestly, I'm only going to listen to this once because your voice really ruins it. This would be bomb if it was deeper. Now third verse it gets a bit deeper and more tolerable, keep working on it.
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby $0 R3@L » Jun 5th, '07, 13:15

Voice is not good,but your young it can only get better.

Flow and lyrics are brilliant.Great job,your putting alot of people on here to shame.

I liked that track alot,great job to both you and mart :y:
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby ThomasAguanis » Jun 6th, '07, 00:37

listening now:

I'm guessing this is the chorus first. it's pretty good.
1st verse:
flow's great. lyrics are awesome, didn't expect that :sweating: you have some sick lines in there.
chorus seems more catchy the 2nd time.
2nd verse:
flow is still nice, i didn't hear you slip once yet. lyrics are up to par with the last verse and you have some great comparisons in there.
yeah this chorus is nicer the more i hear it \:D/
3rd verse:
same as above really. you keep lyrics at a high level and flow's sick too. Woah I really liked the Chris Angel part and the few bars after that.


overall:
nice song man. you had a great flow and some sick lyrics throughout. You seemed to project your voice nicely through it and i could understand every word basically. Keep it up man, I really enjoyed that track. and nice beat mart, it didn't really sound a lot like your others but still had a bit of your sound in it which is always good. :y:
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby Rapsoldier101 » Jun 7th, '07, 06:28

ThomasAguanis wrote:listening now:

I'm guessing this is the chorus first. it's pretty good.
1st verse:
flow's great. lyrics are awesome, didn't expect that :sweating: you have some sick lines in there.
chorus seems more catchy the 2nd time.
2nd verse:
flow is still nice, i didn't hear you slip once yet. lyrics are up to par with the last verse and you have some great comparisons in there.
yeah this chorus is nicer the more i hear it \:D/
3rd verse:
same as above really. you keep lyrics at a high level and flow's sick too. Woah I really liked the Chris Angel part and the few bars after that.


overall:
nice song man. you had a great flow and some sick lyrics throughout. You seemed to project your voice nicely through it and i could understand every word basically. Keep it up man, I really enjoyed that track. and nice beat mart, it didn't really sound a lot like your others but still had a bit of your sound in it which is always good. :y:



thanks! prolly the best reveiw i ever got on TR :flower: but dont get it twisted i like all advice and comments though, but thanks thomas
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby Xray » Jun 9th, '07, 03:26

godd damn bro this beat is outragous :worship: :worship:

ur flow is Tops man love it man ur lyrics are crazy as fuck man everyting was 100% crazy for me except for ur tone of ur voice i think u got same problem wid kezz like ur acas dunno always sound too high tonned but other than that this track is fucken crazy keep at it man and yo mart u fucken genuios damn i wonder how much cash u got in ur bank from these beats :worship:
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Re: **NEW**Lil M - Ready For This (Prod. By Mart85)

Postby Speech » Jun 9th, '07, 16:44

can't hate on this one....perfect delivery man.....voice not my thing as always...but rest was the shit buddy.....keep that up

mart.....fuckin nice work on your beats man....they burnin shit up fo real
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