by ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 9th, '07, 23:19
aint goin to go into verse for verse unless its a ft., so all of these are commenting on the track as a whole
My Thoughts - vocals are so much clearer and this helps everyhting be apreciated more, flow on this is solid, lyrics are good nothing spectacular but meaningful, hooks is one of your best, just works. defiantly one of my favs from you, beat is sick, if the rest of the tracks are like this its gonni be the shit
Nobody - flow again solid, good use of sample, lyrics arent really up there, they got meaning but rhyming aint at its best, beat is sick. wasnt feeling the random slow down n deep effect you used, didnt fit the beat. again though good track
Hunt Me - flow is solid again. like the story telling sort of thing you got goin. lyrics again aint complex but it works. chorus is ok, think it could have been done softer then overlayed in mixing. beat is sick.
Hold The Globe - flow on this is sick as always. lyrics are better. whats said in the bit you cut out ? lol its bugging me, hook is cool. c-riz, your flow has improved thing to work on is eveytime you come to the end of a line your bretahing is obvious and its makes it sound choppy so keep working on that, lyrics are better form your last stuff i heard so your defiantly getting better.sick beat again.
Mass Destruction - agressive beat is sick, same with the agressive flow n lyrics all sounds great. lyrics are probly the best so far fast flow makes it harder to decipher though lol. probly the best so far, great work man.
Hey Shawtie - aint feeling the chorus. flow is good as always. aint feeling the concept n stuff, not my kind of track but thats just a personel thing, beat again aint my taste, but for what it is if this is what you like its a good job.
Bitch Talk(Skit) - lmao!! enimee did one of these for me aswell always funny laughing at this loser, his jock stinks ? he needs to go in a shower
Em N' Me - sick beat, same with the flow, lyrics are good on this, nice punches and you keep on point. nice diss, and kills anything enimee could do, nice work with the so many tears line, nice flip, probably the best line in it
Rudolph (Skit) - lmao funny shit
Up Again - nice beat, good flow especially for freestyle, nice lines aswell for of the dome, play them like nintendo lol good work man, one of the best TR freestyles
Momma Ima Thug - again i think the hook should have been done softer then over layed. nice flow on the verses, nice lyrics nothing complex though, aint my style but again people who like this stuff will enjoy this.
Ride With Me - as always COA (aka harlem, aka cocoa , aka he got to many aka's) got good flow, but lyrics aint strong enough, ax-d got sick flow aswell nice lyrics but they could be better though everything solid. good track ncie mic passing and it actually sound like ya'll int he same booth recording witch is good.
I Remeber - sick beat and nice sample, sick flow as always, deep meanignful lyrics. defo one of the best on the tape man. nothign else i can say great track man.
Another Brick In The Wall - sick beat. flow is solid as always, lyrics are kool again nothing to complex. solid track.
Overall - your flow is sorted man, like i dont think you could work on that anymore, now with the added quality is sounds even better, delivery aswell is fine through-out, concepts vary witch is good but all your tapes have the same concepts even though they are different though out the tape..if you get me. think the new quality makes the singing better just needs mixed differently like i said on couple of tracks. i think you got to up your lyrics more, now that you got great quality every word is heard perfect and your rhyming wasnt up to what it could be. this is defiantly your best work but i think its only because eveythign is alot more listenable. i relised it was a quick project and dam no one can knock your determination and work ethnic. although i think its your downfall in a way, you do lots of tapes fast but if you took alot of time over one tape, like making 30-40 tracks (you probly make that many from voice in the rain, adrenaline ruch ect.) picked the best 15, your owuld end up with a awesome album and the rest could go on a mixtape. just my opinion but if i had the time and work rate you had thats what i would do. i think thats all i had to say, keep it up man
just aint started writing one lol, anywae this will be done in a hour n a half or so 
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