SaJJad - Destruction Of The First Aid

[Xray]

Whats good peeps? anyways please don't ask questions if my name is Illegal Heist or SaJJad cause its SaJJad and Illegal Heist is a persona that I will use sometimes. As you know Im working on a mixtape, which is called Born Alone Ride Alone 2, and this verse is just the first verse of a song on the tape. The full song will be on the tape obviously, but if you haven't heard Born Alone Ride Alone before, check it out. PM me if you want the link, anyways let me know what ya think of this one. IMO it tops all my shit, yeah I said it!!

[Verse]
It's the destruction of the first aid, I'm damaging your shame
you can not be repaired, so be prepared for eternal pain
desert your frame, from your spirit, the reaper I came
a promised death is always certain, my blade is slayin
S is insulting, Im back and revolting
Blitznext were closing, the days of disappointment
rising straight above, like a rocket launching
closing in these emcees, the game needs some smokin
Just-ice...motherfucker its justice, never trust it
thats why you freeze when the pigs gets you busted
I guess Im a fucking suspect, cause I be spitting led
my bars be putting holes in ya, holes in ya head
thats what you get when my instincts is accurate
pen cuts deep, when I be on some verbal shit
Im not a Sheikh, Im a blitznext nightmare
the reason for your prayer, the last little breath of air
before I disappear, Ima show you I'll be here
eternal life like a mortal, my type is rare
a coldblooded emcee, Im acapellin
if Chamillionaire is the rap police, than Im the villian
coming for yar finance, no need for guidance
I dont need a fucking map to direct me to your hidings
Im like a GPS, mixed with a lie detector
showin at ya door step, your fuckin with the..
your fuckin with the...
your fuckin with the....

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[°[~CHR!$~]°]

nice energy you brought there...thats the sajjad i want to see...
maybe its just me but you pronounced "before" strangely..idk...this wasnt 100% clear to me
but flow,lyrics (especially the just-ice/justice thing was nice)....all went well together...

[Drama Setter]

that's awesome . I copied your song "death warrant " on my mp3 player .I listen to it every where I go . am gonna copy this too.

[SajN]

Damn, I like the beginning of your lyrics
The beat is hot!


I don't know if it's only me, but I think you sound always the same. The delivery feels the same always...
But that could be only me, I dont know lol.

But dope first verse

[Robbie G]

The beat was dope, sounded like stoupe made it. Also the flow and lyrics were good as usual.

I can agree with SaJn that a lot of your songs sound similar, but the undergroundish tracks are when your at your best.

[B.A.D.]

I hate to feed tracks on beats that I used hahah

I used this beat for my "Memories Of You" track ft. kez hahaha

but hmm, there was something strange about your structure, felt strange to me

other than that the delivery, lyrics and flow are perfect, definitively looking forward for the finished track

plus

BORN ALONE RIDE ALONE 2?????????????

this is going to be something big

[Xray]

Thanks for the feedback guys, appreciate that shit alot. As for me always sounding the same, Im just spreading my message across. Yous judge me as if other Hip Hop artists are soo versatile when there not. Its called a style, I have that underground style, I love that underground style, so if I make that underground shit, well than excuse me, but Im just being me. My favourite and biggest influence in rap is Mobb Deep, and 90% of there shit is always on the same subject matter, cause thats who they are. Ofcourse they will be times where you make a love, deep, strange, drug, or other type of conceptual song, but every artist has his style and that means your mostly going to be hearing that style of his. So whoever says I make alot of underground songs or says I always sound the same, to me that shit is invalid cause your being a hypocrite, I bet your favourite artist has a comfort zone too? Well I have one too, and thats making underground songs. Its obvious why I choose to make these type of songs, cause first I love underground songs, and second because Im sick and tired of commercial rap and that fake shit. I support original rap, remember the 90's? Oh I forgot in the 90's rappers were soooooooo versatile and had soooooo many different concept songs on a album right? shit my bad. Lol please don't mention shit like that again, cause its ridiculous.

[SajN]

you sound the same

[Xray]

You fucking hotty, stop ruining my thread!! Keep the feed coming.

[randomghost]

haha the same beat that i already used for ma upcoming album hehe....nice flow..good delivery...feelin ya lyrics...sheikh..hehe..nice style...keep it up

[Xray]

Thanks homie, appreciate the feed bro. Looking forward to that song of yours.

[<Stiiccy>]

i love your delivery in this...flow was also very good...

mixing as always is above average...

the beat was magical...

the content was typical sajjad hahaha...one thing i do like about you...you are preety consistent...theres almost never a verse you release that sucks...everything is preety good...

i liked it homie

[threeandtwenty]

[Verse]

Im like a GPS, mixed with a lie detector
showin at ya door step, your fuckin with the..

liked the way you did that rhyme

oh,about the comfort zone thing...i totally agree with you,except im sure you COULD do other topics too if you tried.how do you write?
i first listen to a beat and think of what im reminded of,(like this one reminds me of a house with one candle and some parts of my childhood,)where as you (i think) just go in with a preconceived notion of rippin it underground.yeah?

[Xray]

[Verse]

Im like a GPS, mixed with a lie detector
showin at ya door step, your fuckin with the..

liked the way you did that rhyme

oh,about the comfort zone thing...i totally agree with you,except im sure you COULD do other topics too if you tried.how do you write?
i first listen to a beat and think of what im reminded of,(like this one reminds me of a house with one candle and some parts of my childhood,)where as you (i think) just go in with a preconceived notion of rippin it underground.yeah?

Pretty much that, except this verse was written ages ago, like 4 months ago or something. Never recorded it, so I was listening to this beat and just going through my book, found this verse and had to go with it. I get where your coming from, cause this beat sounds emotional, and judging from so many rap songs Ive heard, most of the time they go the opposite and just rip it up. So thats why I didn't go with an emotional one, cause for once I wanted to try that. Thanks for the feedback bro appreciate it. Props to sticcy too.

[_Ironic_]

lyrically, this shit is fire...but the delivery of it just seemed a bit off..your voice doesn't match the flow quite right..but other than that this a stand-out track..you should try to work on harmonizing your voice to the beat you're on along with the flow you're doing. It sounds like you're trying too hard to convey your message rather than just letting it come from within..once you find that happy medium I could see this as a street single.

thanks for the feed back on my track though; the beat I purchased from a guy who called himself Bronco Stefan, and he's a bitch ass dude who stole my money because that's an industry beat and he had no rights to the music so I couldn't use that beat and also around 10 different songs that I had bought beats for because of this guy...The Mixtape that track was on never got released because I didn't own the rights to over half the music...very shitty situation, always make sure your producer MADE HIS BEAT..that is if you want to make money off of rap.

EDIT:
coming for yar finance, no need for guidance
I dont need a fucking map to direct me to your hidings

best lines in the track imo, wordplay was smooth