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Sajjad - Take Me Away

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Re: Sajjad - Take Me Away

Postby Arabian Shady » Oct 22nd, '10, 14:59

I CANT LISTEN TO IT!
How about a z-share link or somfin' man?
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Sajjad - Take Me Away

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 22nd, '10, 17:26

2nd verse was sick. flow, lyrics, delivery. just overall a pretty flawless verse

verse one was average to me. sounded overall messy flow wise, and you didn't sound to assured of it yourself.

but overall it was a good song. i enjoyed it. i'd say just fix the 1st verse up more and it'll be dope
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Re: Sajjad - Take Me Away

Postby Tash8 » Oct 22nd, '10, 17:58

good job man, keep doing ur thing. you just need to put more effort and grind out more tracks
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Re: Sajjad - Take Me Away

Postby preest » Oct 23rd, '10, 13:30

I realy cant fault this track (not that I want to lol) this shit is fire, I maybe would have added a nice deep catchy hook to draw people in but apart from that its crazy! I love the flow and the way you've played around with the voice in parts, the production on this track sick, sounds fully mastered!! I cant wait to hear more :y:
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