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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby Maybe » May 12th, '11, 01:24

Thanks ^ I'll leave some feed soon.
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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby classthe_king » May 15th, '11, 21:41

Interested to hear it
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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby Robbie G » May 16th, '11, 22:19

I enjoyed it. I thought you vocals were a little to quiet for the beat though.
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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby classthe_king » May 20th, '11, 03:07

Thanks Robbie :b:
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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby Master_Percussionist » May 22nd, '11, 02:38

What daft moron did the levels on this? I'd feed but someome did a Hellen Keller-esque job on the vocal volumess.
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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby Maybe » May 24th, '11, 03:38

Your flow was only slightly short of phenomenal. You displayed very few hiccups (and the few quirks were only transitional rhymes). Your lyrics were solid, and the emotion was surprisingly good. I'm actually surprised how good you've become... You use to be all lyrics, but now you're backing up the lyricism with high grade vocals.

The beat choice, on the other hand, wasn't my cup of tea, and the vocals weren't mixed well on the sharp notes of the instrumental. I understand that quality sound conflicts with compression, but the beat should have been slightly equalized to allow a more enjoyable listen.

None the less, amazing work. This is going on the iPod and now I want more from you... so, hit me up with a PM and some links when you get a minute.
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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby classthe_king » May 31st, '11, 00:59

Thanks man, that means a lot
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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby Mahmoud48 » May 31st, '11, 01:13

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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby dR3 » May 31st, '11, 01:57

I actually like the beat, unlike the majority in this thread.

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It's mind-blowing how much you've improved since your first drop, I'm serious. Not lyrically, I mean flow, delivery and quality-wise. You sound really hungry, and may I say, you ate that beat up.

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Cole has improved a ton as well, only thing he needs to keep working on is his breath control. And he needs to get a better mic, lmao.


All in all, I really enjoy listening to this, and would gladly listen to your tape guys. Just keep doing your thing and keep improving! Peace.
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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby classthe_king » Jun 10th, '11, 02:49

Thanks Dr3, glad you think I've improved :b:
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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby Artille » Jun 10th, '11, 03:31

This was not bad at all, but not perfect either. I'll feed for each verse individually

Verse 1:
First off, your vocals were a bit too low, which lowers the quality of the verse drastically. What kind of mic do you have? The vocals were clear at times, but seemed distorted at others. The whole verse overall sounded muffled. Your flow was alright, could have been a bit smoother. I liked that it wasn't the constant boring flow, it was a bit faster, but sometimes your transitions from bar to bar were off. Lyrics were good, heard a couple basic ones and a couple that sounded familiar to something Eminem has said :whistle: Overall, it wasn't too bad, but could definitely use some work. Raise your vocals next time, not a bad drop though.

Verse 2:
A bit better. Your flow was damn near perfect throughout your verse. Your vocals were also a bit low, but not quite as noticeable as Sentus' (or Coleon's LOL) verse was. Lyrics were ill overall and there was nothing corny or lame that I spotted. Quality was decent as well. Overall, your verse was better on this one.

You guys make decent collabo's. Fire Flame beat is pretty good, just annoying to listen to for a long period of time to give proper feedback haha. Hit me up if you ever need a feature.
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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby WinstonMARX » Jun 11th, '11, 22:24

Artille wrote:This was not bad at all, but not perfect either. I'll feed for each verse individually

Verse 1:
First off, your vocals were a bit too low, which lowers the quality of the verse drastically. What kind of mic do you have? The vocals were clear at times, but seemed distorted at others. The whole verse overall sounded muffled. Your flow was alright, could have been a bit smoother. I liked that it wasn't the constant boring flow, it was a bit faster, but sometimes your transitions from bar to bar were off. Lyrics were good, heard a couple basic ones and a couple that sounded familiar to something Eminem has said :whistle: Overall, it wasn't too bad, but could definitely use some work. Raise your vocals next time, not a bad drop though.

Verse 2:
A bit better. Your flow was damn near perfect throughout your verse. Your vocals were also a bit low, but not quite as noticeable as Sentus' (or Coleon's LOL) verse was. Lyrics were ill overall and there was nothing corny or lame that I spotted. Quality was decent as well. Overall, your verse was better on this one.

You guys make decent collabo's. Fire Flame beat is pretty good, just annoying to listen to for a long period of time to give proper feedback haha. Hit me up if you ever need a feature.


This was just a promo, we've got a real project coming out soon. Be on the look out.

Our schedules are pretty packed with the tape but after I feel a collab spree. I'll let you know.
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Re: Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

Postby classthe_king » Jul 7th, '11, 21:12

Thanks for the feed Artille, but I assure you, anything I said that's similar to Eminem is purely coincidence considering I don't even listen to anything he puts out anymore.
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