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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby VenomBlackViper » Jun 10th, '11, 16:58

mcZu wrote:^Word, me and X are cooler than drinking frozen Koolaid in Siberia.

Well here comes the brainfreeze.
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby Xray » Jun 10th, '11, 17:02

classthe_king wrote:Your delivery/flow is amazing. You sound so good on tracks, it's incredible.

Thank you man, I appreciate it. :b:

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mcZu wrote:^Word, me and X are cooler than drinking frozen Koolaid in Siberia.

Well here comes the brainfreeze.

Well thank you, for saying I have a brain, I appreciate it fam. :b:
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby dR3 » Jun 10th, '11, 17:22

Flow/delivery/lyrics:
Do I really need to talk about them? Flow's perfect as always, same goes for the delivery.
Lyrics were nothing mind-blowing, but did the job well.

The hook:
You should've tried to clone the vocals and pan them on the opposite sides (one on the left and one on the right speaker), that way it would have that stand-out effect and it would sound more energized.

The beat:
Well, it misses that fullness, if you know what I mean, it kind of sounds amateurish. I really like the drum pattern, but maybe you should try adding reeverb or something to one/some of the instruments.


Just my thoughts, I'm checking the tape definitely. If it comes out. :shifty:
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby VenomBlackViper » Jun 10th, '11, 17:35

SaJJad's tape = Detox of TR? :o
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby classthe_king » Jun 10th, '11, 17:42

VenomBlackViper wrote:SaJJad's tape = Detox of TR? :o


Sorry, that title has already been given to Mc Maybe's album.
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby Kez » Jun 10th, '11, 17:52

Classhole is correct sadly

X, track was decent but a bit stripped down. The verses I have no complaints and your voice and delivery is always enjoyable to listen to, no homo. Flow was pretty much spot on. You don't really need me to tell you this shit lol. The mispronunciation of meteors has been addressed so I won't bring it back up. I liked the beat actually, at first it sounded very basic but then when the guitar came in I thought it aided it a lot and made it seem less amateur. Like you were actually going for less combining instruments in the beat as opposed to just being a noob at it.

And I too would enjoy actually seeing you release another tape for a change haha. It's been fuck knows how long :p Keep it up
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby Xray » Jun 10th, '11, 18:02

dR3 wrote:The hook:
You should've tried to clone the vocals and pan them on the opposite sides (one on the left and one on the right speaker), that way it would have that stand-out effect and it would sound more energized.

The beat:
Well, it misses that fullness, if you know what I mean, it kind of sounds amateurish. I really like the drum pattern, but maybe you should try adding reeverb or something to one/some of the instruments.

Agreed. Thanks for the feed bro. :b:

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VenomBlackViper wrote:SaJJad's tape = Detox of TR? :o


Sorry, that title has already been given to Mc Maybe's album.

Word. I remember he was even willing to sell that shit online. I think coupla people even pre-ordered it, but I don't know what happened from then on.

Kez wrote:I liked the beat actually, at first it sounded very basic but then when the guitar came in I thought it aided it a lot and made it seem less amateur. Like you were actually going for less combining instruments in the beat as opposed to just being a noob at it.

And I too would enjoy actually seeing you release another tape for a change haha. It's been fuck knows how long :p Keep it up

Thanks bro, much appreciated. And I'ma get on our track soon.

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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby Maybe » Jun 10th, '11, 18:08

I refunded the money to those who payed ahead of time, and shut down mcmaybe.com. I quit music after that album because my harddrive AND backup drive were wiped and I lost around 40 songs (recorded and mixed).

That's why the album was delayed.

Anyway, this was a DOPE song man. Your flow/presence is astounding. You have such an awesome grasp of the beat that it's crazy... Also, the beat was sick. It was simple, but nonetheless well done.
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jun 10th, '11, 22:57

track is oh deee
only thing that coulda been a little better is if the kicks hit a little harder
but besides that you delivered some swagged out stuff




classthe_king wrote:
VenomBlackViper wrote:SaJJad's tape = Detox of TR? :o


Sorry, that title has already been given to Mc Maybe's album.


PK's album* :coffee:
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 11th, '11, 06:52

Xray wrote:Kez and X back in this bitch. :smoking:


I came... :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:


the song is dope... man, the beat is awsome!!.. Sounds very similar to what I've been producing lately.. u usin those Slayer Plug In's I see... I fucking love them.

I liked the lyrics above all on the track, some interesting and creative punches there. cool stuff... The flow and delivery I didnt liked so much, seems to soft for your type, I like better when you get a little bit faster and when the flow is more complex, cuz even for you this is too plain. But non-the less this was great to listen to... and the beat goes very very good with it... dope as song man :y:
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby Sam. » Jun 11th, '11, 15:05

good shi bro i liked it .

BEAT:it was a little annoying at first but after few listens this little complaint got weeded out,chea beat has a mafia type of feel to it . :smoking:
LYRICS:pretty tight and you went in hard in this .
FLOW:awesome shit i really enjoyed the flow on the 1st verse ,but the second verse was not that powerfull as the first one (i may be wrong tho no offence) .

overall a 9/10 track ,feels like i am gonna rock this joint for a very long time now. :worship:
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby Robbie G » Jun 13th, '11, 16:21

That was pretty good man, I loved the beat. My only issue with it is that I had a hard time understanding most of the lines without reading them while listening.

Good shit though :y:
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby Xray » Jun 14th, '11, 10:37

Props for all the feed fam, really appreciate it.

This will prolly be the last track I post in a while. My internet got disconnected (huge bill) so I won't be as active. I'll try to sneak in exclusives when I'm at friends places and shit so all good ma n1ggaz. Peace out for now.
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Re: SaJJad - City of Thieves [produced by SaJJad]

Postby Mc Cubz » Jun 17th, '11, 11:03

very nice tune man! I'd love to collaborate on a track with you! :b:
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