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Postby Xray » Apr 28th, '07, 06:52

Tash8 wrote:
Sajjad wrote:good lyrics good flow great beat for tha content of the song and onestly i recon mart could of done better on the mixing.


yea on the chorus, i think that could have been better by having on echo on the first bar.. but it was sttill hot.


yea but seriosly mart's mixing is alot better than this for example listen to the other bar songs you can tell how good mart's mixing is but on this one it didnt sound like marts mixing :unsure:
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Postby mart85 » Apr 28th, '07, 06:53

Sajjad wrote:good lyrics good flow great beat for tha content of the song and onestly i recon mart could of done better on the mixing.


could you tell me what exactly I should have done better? :sweating: I wanna know, cause I always wanna get better :D

and tash, I made a few tests with the echo on the chorus, and I thought it didn't really sound good, and it was better with just delay on the "you ain't got the right"... cause sometimes echoes get irritating when there are too much :whistle: I even deleted some in the verses cause it was kinda over the top lol

but that's a matter of opinion/taste I guess :happy:
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Postby DC4952 » Apr 28th, '07, 06:57

mart85 wrote:
Sajjad wrote:good lyrics good flow great beat for tha content of the song and onestly i recon mart could of done better on the mixing.


could you tell me what exactly I should have done better? :sweating: I wanna know, cause I always wanna get better :D

and tash, I made a few tests with the echo on the chorus, and I thought it didn't really sound good, and it was better with just delay on the "you ain't got the right"... cause sometimes echoes get irritating when there are too much :whistle: I even deleted some in the verses cause it was kinda over the top lol

but that's a matter of opinion/taste I guess :happy:


hey mart wen bar pmed me the song on zshare and i listened i thought the beat cud of been just a lil louder. i dunno tho its prolly me im tired lol.

p.s. i think this is one of my best beats too :)
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Postby mart85 » Apr 28th, '07, 07:10

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Tash8 wrote:
Sajjad wrote:good lyrics good flow great beat for tha content of the song and onestly i recon mart could of done better on the mixing.


yea on the chorus, i think that could have been better by having on echo on the first bar.. but it was sttill hot.


yea but seriosly mart's mixing is alot better than this for example listen to the other bar songs you can tell how good mart's mixing is but on this one it didnt sound like marts mixing :unsure:


oh you mean, the overall sound of the mix? that's because I only mixed the vocals... when I mix a song with a beat that I didn't made, I prefer to not do too much during the mastering part cause I wanna make sure I don't ruin the beat lol... I'm not good enough with mastering, I'm better at mixing :happy:

and yeah DC, you're right, the beat could be a bit louder... at first I wanted the vocals to be a bit louder since it's a slow deep song, but I just checked again, and yeah the beat could a bit louder :happy: I'll change it for the tape :shifty:
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 28th, '07, 07:13

mart85 wrote:
Sajjad wrote:good lyrics good flow great beat for tha content of the song and onestly i recon mart could of done better on the mixing.


could you tell me what exactly I should have done better? :sweating: I wanna know, cause I always wanna get better :D

and tash, I made a few tests with the echo on the chorus, and I thought it didn't really sound good, and it was better with just delay on the "you ain't got the right"... cause sometimes echoes get irritating when there are too much :whistle: I even deleted some in the verses cause it was kinda over the top lol

but that's a matter of opinion/taste I guess :happy:


oh i c, well the rreason i said that is because it sounded really good when you did it.
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Postby Xray » Apr 28th, '07, 07:16

mart85 wrote:
Sajjad wrote:good lyrics good flow great beat for tha content of the song and onestly i recon mart could of done better on the mixing.


could you tell me what exactly I should have done better? :sweating: I wanna know, cause I always wanna get better :D

and tash, I made a few tests with the echo on the chorus, and I thought it didn't really sound good, and it was better with just delay on the "you ain't got the right"... cause sometimes echoes get irritating when there are too much :whistle: I even deleted some in the verses cause it was kinda over the top lol

but that's a matter of opinion/taste I guess :happy:



yea lol tha thing that you could of done better is editing tha acapellas like it sounds too raw. dunno wen i listen to ur other shit it sounds way different to this mixing im not talking about echoes or shit like that im saying edit tha aca by like tha way you did in tha last bar's single.
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Postby Xray » Apr 28th, '07, 07:21

mart85 wrote:
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Tash8 wrote:
Sajjad wrote:good lyrics good flow great beat for tha content of the song and onestly i recon mart could of done better on the mixing.


yea on the chorus, i think that could have been better by having on echo on the first bar.. but it was sttill hot.


yea but seriosly mart's mixing is alot better than this for example listen to the other bar songs you can tell how good mart's mixing is but on this one it didnt sound like marts mixing :unsure:


oh you mean, the overall sound of the mix? that's because I only mixed the vocals... when I mix a song with a beat that I didn't made, I prefer to not do too much during the mastering part cause I wanna make sure I don't ruin the beat lol... I'm not good enough with mastering, I'm better at mixing :happy:

and yeah DC, you're right, the beat could be a bit louder... at first I wanted the vocals to be a bit louder since it's a slow deep song, but I just checked again, and yeah the beat could a bit louder :happy: I'll change it for the tape :shifty:


oHh but if you would of made tha mastering much better tha song would be better too but great song Bar good work :worship:
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Postby DC4952 » Apr 28th, '07, 07:37

mart85 wrote:
Sajjad wrote:
Tash8 wrote:
Sajjad wrote:good lyrics good flow great beat for tha content of the song and onestly i recon mart could of done better on the mixing.


yea on the chorus, i think that could have been better by having on echo on the first bar.. but it was sttill hot.


yea but seriosly mart's mixing is alot better than this for example listen to the other bar songs you can tell how good mart's mixing is but on this one it didnt sound like marts mixing :unsure:


oh you mean, the overall sound of the mix? that's because I only mixed the vocals... when I mix a song with a beat that I didn't made, I prefer to not do too much during the mastering part cause I wanna make sure I don't ruin the beat lol... I'm not good enough with mastering, I'm better at mixing :happy:

and yeah DC, you're right, the beat could be a bit louder... at first I wanted the vocals to be a bit louder since it's a slow deep song, but I just checked again, and yeah the beat could a bit louder :happy: I'll change it for the tape :shifty:


alrite. i guess i wasnt that tired lol. i goin to bed now...
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Postby mart85 » Apr 28th, '07, 07:38

^^ yeah but like I said, I would probably end up ruining the beat too lol... I leave real mastering to those who spent years studying that art :whistle:



but like DC said, the vocals are a bit too loud, so it changes the overall sound... cause as far as I can remember, I didn't do anything different while editing the acapellas lol :sweating: but I'll adjust the level of the vocals and send it to Bar :happy:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 28th, '07, 11:06

well if the mixing ya'll talking about overlays n stuff it wasnt mart that never did them i sayed to him not to have them, its a deeper track over editing in the accapella would have taken away the feel of the track, the rawness of my voice is to get the emotion in there...n i thought the mixing on the chorus was sick :whistle: and i dunno what the hell masterin is so...yeh lmao



thx for the comments ya'll :worship:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 28th, '07, 11:28

I like this one alot for many reasons;lyrics,concepts,beat,hook.Its great to see that not every single is a mart beat,shows diversity.Hook was prolly the best part of the track,although the verses were just as nice.Mixing was pretty good,prolly could of used overlays on the verses.

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 28th, '07, 11:47

$0 R3@L wrote:I like this one alot for many reasons;lyrics,concepts,beat,hook.Its great to see that not every single is a mart beat,shows diversity.Hook was prolly the best part of the track,although the verses were just as nice.Mixing was pretty good,prolly could of used overlays on the verses.

Great job both you guys.


yeh i aint got all mart beats on the tape..i have got alot though :sweating: but i made sure they were all completely different styles so it doesnt get too much similiar if like i had all of his energetic style beats lol

thx for the feed man :worship: and again no overlays was my decision :sweating:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 28th, '07, 11:53

Well if you planned not to use them thats cool then.Overlays wouldnt take away from the rawness or feel of the song they just make it sound less flat. Also if you try playing this via speaker system rather then headphones you'll see what i mean,the verses sound sorta flat and bland.Overlays just giv it a little bass boost as well as puffing out the sound also add clarity to your rhymes to make what your saying clearer.

Its all about trial and error but the best way to check for 'true' sound of your tracks, its best playing them via speaker system.A track can sound sick thru headphones yet real flat via speakers.

who mixed this btw? mart acapella?
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 28th, '07, 11:56

$0 R3@L wrote:Well if you planned not to use them thats cool then.Overlays wouldnt take away from the rawness or feel of the song they just make it sound less flat. Also if you try playing this via speaker system rather then headphones you'll see what i mean,the verses sound sorta flat and bland.Overlays just giv it a little bass boost as well as puffing out the sound also add clarity to your rhymes to make what your saying clearer.

Its all about trial and error but the best way to check for 'true' sound of your tracks, its best playing them via speaker system.A track can sound sick thru headphones yet real flat via speakers.

who mixed this btw? mart acapella?


i havent listened to it on speakers funnily enough, and yeh mart mixed the accapella, if people are thinking itd be better with overlays i'll do some and see if mart can mix them in for the version on the tape :sweating:

thx man :worship:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 28th, '07, 11:59

no problem man its a brilliant track man :worship: :drunksigning:
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