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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby HAYZI » Sep 28th, '07, 23:58

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they were still good, i just thought the other ones were better, idk maybe just different things i notice or somehting :sweating: as for the tr tape, i think any track formt his that has good mixing and stuff would work :y: but then again imma hayzi groupie so you better file the restrainign order quickly :whistle: lmao j/k



lmao my second officail groupie :8) i bet u dont give as good head as my girlfrend tho :p j/p


im gonna have to get u on one of my tracks, it was always the plan to get u to write and record the hook for Trekkin but i never really got round to it
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 29th, '07, 00:04

im gonna have to get u on one of my tracks, it was always the plan to get u to write and record the hook for Trekkin but i never really got round to it


yeh defiantly man, whenever you need somehting just PM me and ill get it done asap, hard to find time with college and job hunting but i got recoridng times on mondays so it should be all good :y:
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby Mc Cubz » Sep 29th, '07, 06:52

a hayzi cd big big big cant wait for this shit to download it will take a while il probs feed u in a few hours wen i herd them newy, but big man about time u got moving, we need to get onto collabs in the near future!
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby Mc Cubz » Sep 29th, '07, 07:52

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
check u hayzi on tr ur a grime boy man, ghetto koyote too much ratidnesssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!
I duno if u shud b doing a cd wid me man this is too much, ur sound quality is fuked up man lol, its arite tho cos it kind of adds to the underground feel, u need a better mic n stuff for our cd on a level, btw tho, theres abit of inconsitency in ur pellas, like it goes quieter n louder at diff parts, but u need to compress more n shit or have a more clear mic or sumfin, id love to do a grime track back to back wid u - ud murk me but i got sum grime bars for one track, but we shud use a bait riddim rather than one of redas i think i got 96 bars instrumental, north london riddim, gangsters remix (dutty trust me), and a few others, did i hear rite - tht u do dnb aswell? nah but few ppl can murk grime and rap, u do innit, bar was rite if u worked hard u cud actualy murk the fuk out of the uk, im quite into the uk shit i assume u are if ur making them typa tracks, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh tht ghetto koyote is still playing its murkage its too much man, I duno about like deep lyrics I will be honest I still think thers one or two mayb wid deeper bars but I dont wana say defo, but theres now no doubt in terms of flows, hype and sound n shit ur the best on here now in my opinion, but its about murking the uk, u shud write to dnb n use the lyrics for rap also, do u smoke - u sound like u got a gritty voice I have to reli force my voice cos i dont have as much of a dmx voice myself lol, u shud get a myspace up NOWWWWW, soundlick is jus gay loool, newy I also like click blow and uh-oh, street level actually is pretty deep, ras i didnt knw ya was this deep lol, this is raw uk even for the uk - u make wiley sound american lol, nah if we do this cd then i need to hype myself up abit otherwise i will sound like a baby back to back, but it will be nasty - i hope we compliment each other, tbh id say ur better at grime u knw, but u often on this tape develop sum good flows on rap aswell, btw wen u record u shud remove the breaths more, and like if u fuk up one word in the whole verse re-record tht bar or mask it wid a extra layer i.e. an adlip, but u need to use more recording techniques to sound sick, this tape basically just shows bare natural talent, serisous, back in da day wen sum of these tunes were made i was a baby, i still feel abit murked by u even now tbh, this is sick ur ready for propa cds now, theres no excuse for poor sound quality n shit wid dat talent! :worship:
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby Mc Cubz » Sep 29th, '07, 07:55

loooooooooool -at how it took exactly an hour to send the second reply

yo hayzi if sum1 can make one of them pics tht is also a link or whteva il put it on myspace the uk needs to hear this shit i rekon u knw, but also i need to do a grime tune wid u, my dj mixed me a 1 hour dnb set, if u do spit dnb to feat on it, even if its jus a verse lol, i most of my shit is rap over dnb lol, newy get back to me time to murk these uk wasteman!!!!!1
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 29th, '07, 18:52

feeding today and bumping this up
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby HAYZI » Sep 29th, '07, 22:01

Mc Cubz wrote:naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
check u hayzi on tr ur a grime boy man, ghetto koyote too much ratidnesssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!
I duno if u shud b doing a cd wid me man this is too much, ur sound quality is fuked up man lol, its arite tho cos it kind of adds to the underground feel, u need a better mic n stuff for our cd on a level, btw tho, theres abit of inconsitency in ur pellas, like it goes quieter n louder at diff parts, but u need to compress more n shit or have a more clear mic or sumfin, id love to do a grime track back to back wid u - ud murk me but i got sum grime bars for one track, but we shud use a bait riddim rather than one of redas i think i got 96 bars instrumental, north london riddim, gangsters remix (dutty trust me), and a few others, did i hear rite - tht u do dnb aswell? nah but few ppl can murk grime and rap, u do innit, bar was rite if u worked hard u cud actualy murk the fuk out of the uk, im quite into the uk shit i assume u are if ur making them typa tracks, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh tht ghetto koyote is still playing its murkage its too much man, I duno about like deep lyrics I will be honest I still think thers one or two mayb wid deeper bars but I dont wana say defo, but theres now no doubt in terms of flows, hype and sound n shit ur the best on here now in my opinion, but its about murking the uk, u shud write to dnb n use the lyrics for rap also, do u smoke - u sound like u got a gritty voice I have to reli force my voice cos i dont have as much of a dmx voice myself lol, u shud get a myspace up NOWWWWW, soundlick is jus gay loool, newy I also like click blow and uh-oh, street level actually is pretty deep, ras i didnt knw ya was this deep lol, this is raw uk even for the uk - u make wiley sound american lol, nah if we do this cd then i need to hype myself up abit otherwise i will sound like a baby back to back, but it will be nasty - i hope we compliment each other, tbh id say ur better at grime u knw, but u often on this tape develop sum good flows on rap aswell, btw wen u record u shud remove the breaths more, and like if u fuk up one word in the whole verse re-record tht bar or mask it wid a extra layer i.e. an adlip, but u need to use more recording techniques to sound sick, this tape basically just shows bare natural talent, serisous, back in da day wen sum of these tunes were made i was a baby, i still feel abit murked by u even now tbh, this is sick ur ready for propa cds now, theres no excuse for poor sound quality n shit wid dat talent! :worship:




damn u people are gettin me hype, this is only my old stuff half of this was never even gonna be put out! thakns for the feed ur an excitable mafucka innit! lol send me any shit u want me to spit on, im buyin a mic this week so its all good now wit quality and ur rite about murkin the uk this is where we gotta be heard i think we could work well together tbh i think u write better bars than me in different ways we have differetn attributes to our game and i reckon wed compliment each other nicely man. ur rite about a more bait tune and not an unknown reda track like i sed man pm me anything and ill get workin and vice versa.

thanks for the feed man and u made very good points about pellas and mixin etc remember its mostly cos its old shit, and it wont be the case no more u'll have to give me sum tips about cleanin acapellas in cool edit cos i just downloaded it and dont know what im doin yet with it theresa a lot more to it than what i use
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby HAYZI » Sep 29th, '07, 22:35

Killa wrote:rite firstly apoligies cos ima wait till 2mo (prolly) cause im still disapointed from watchin the chelsea game and knackerd etc etc bla bla stfu killa lol.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANYWAYZ as always (although ive heard alot of this already) i thought you killed it. i know for a FACT that if im asked whos the best on tr OVERALL i say hayzi.Im not even sure that justifys it ewnough either because (although i still maintain im not fully up on the whole uk scene) i belive you are actually better than 99% of uk artists no bullshit. each artist i bump from here even if i find myself enjoying the tracks alot il find myself some other time playing one of yours thinking hmmm this is slightly better. as previously stated you need a better mic badly, ALTHOUGH i personally belive it does no big damage because you can pretty much see the dopeness thats there in your tracks anyway. i seriously think you need to spends some serious months on 3-6 songs and send the discs off to labels no lie.

and again apoligies for not posting full review just yet but ya made my train journey home alot more berable if it means anything lol.



safe killa, i really appreciate it all the feed ive got so far is better than i expected, all u uk heads have built me up im just waitin for the americans to wade in and knock me down lol!
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby IceAxe » Sep 29th, '07, 23:45

Wont do it track by track, I'd just be repeating the same shit over and over.

The beats are sick. The only thing about them is the bass in some of em is overwhelming, like on Trekkin. It was almost unlistenable cuz of the powerful bass and the not-so-great vocal quality, which brings me to the next point.

Like Bar said, the vocal quality is holdin you back. Work on gettin better quality and you could really go somewhere. But the lyrics are ill as hell, and your flow compliments em great.

Anyway, sick EP overall. :y: just get some better quality on the vocals and you're set
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby HAYZI » Sep 29th, '07, 23:52

IceAxe wrote:Wont do it track by track, I'd just be repeating the same shit over and over.

The beats are sick. The only thing about them is the bass in some of em is overwhelming, like on Trekkin. It was almost unlistenable cuz of the powerful bass and the not-so-great vocal quality, which brings me to the next point.

Like Bar said, the vocal quality is holdin you back. Work on gettin better quality and you could really go somewhere. But the lyrics are ill as hell, and your flow compliments em great.

Anyway, sick EP overall. :y: just get some better quality on the vocals and you're set



thanks man i appreciate it
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby TRshady » Sep 30th, '07, 14:04

I'll definetly be giving this a listen, downloading now.
I've loved what I've heard from you so far Hayzi, will play this through and give feedback real soon.
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby Kez » Sep 30th, '07, 14:53

Oh shit, sorry my review's so late haha:

1 - Uh Oh:
Sick beat
Sick hook, quality seems a bit thingy, you know gets so loud that it buzzes, might just be cause of the beat though
Verses have fuckin crazy flow, some of the best i've heard easily
Not only do you have that UK grime kind of fast flow, but you also have multis!
Sick, 9.5/10

2 - Risin':
Beat's okay
Nice concept, hook is good
Verse is higher volume than hook, isn't it normally the other way around?
Flow is again sick
Liked the beat stop thing
9/10

3 - Call Me Out:
Beat is sick
Hook does it's job
A nice normal speed flow, really good cause you can hear all the words clearer
Some great lines and rhymes
Good shit
9.5/10

4 - Wild Tonight:
Beat is decent tune, but quality seems a bit crackly
Quality is pretty bad on this track
Hook is good
Flow and lyrics are good
8/10

5 - Ghetto Koyote Remix:
Beat seems a bit basic.
Great when it starts up though
Again, good verses
Lol kicked in the arse :y:
8.5/10

6 - Click Blow!:
Beat is sound
Mint hook
Is that gap in the hook intentional?
Again, good verses
Some great lines and rhymes
Last hook seems a little bit off beat
9.5/10

7 - Love You:
Beat seems a bit crackly
Hook is decent
Another good flow
Not much for the concept, not my kinda track
But the skill is still there
8/10

8 - Change Your Mind:
Beat's okay
Good verses, some very good lines
Good concept
Not much for the hook
8.5/10

9 - Trekkin':
Is this that Uh-Oh beat?
Sounds just like it
Is it like a remix or what
You sound a bit quiet compared to your other tracks at times
Good verses
I like the whistling on the hook, hook is good
8/10

10 - Stick Up:
Beat is alright
Quality seems a bit crackly and shit on the hook
Verses flow is good, quality still seems quite bad
Some good lines
Not my favourite kinda concept
7.5/10

11 - Street Level:
Beat is good
Hook is pretty good
Verses good flow and lyrics as usual
8/10

12 - Floatin' Away:
Nice beat
Verses again good
I like the hook
8.5/10

13 - Business (Bonus Track):
Nice little intro thing
I've used this beat! Haha
You did better than me easily
Good verses HAYZI
Who's the other guy? He has good flow and shit as well
Seems to end a bit abruptly.
7/10

14 - Coccoa Diss (Bonus Track)
I aint gettin involved so i'm judging just on the track
Intro thing is good
Flow and everything is good
Hook is funny
9/10

Overall:
I have to go, so i'll do this bit when i get back
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby HAYZI » Sep 30th, '07, 23:32

thanks everyone so far for the feed, thanks kez still waitin on ur summary tho :flower:
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 1st, '07, 00:35

1.uh oh
beat is nice, the the concept of the whole track is good, hook is good, amazing fast lyrics
but the quality is not enjoyable, but the track its good

2.Risin'
the beat sucks hahaha, mmm not likeing this track much, but as soon as the flow comes its all good, again quality is a problem haha, linda hard to understand, but can't deny its a well made track

3.Call Me out
beat sounds familiar, intro can be a bit louder on this, the quality is better on this track, the lyrics are strong, not to fuck with, nice track

4.Wildin out
beat is amazing but quality fucks it up big tyme, nice lyrics spit on this, but you need a better way of mixing, so this can be a real real good track, the concept and creativity on this is nice, would sound nice as a single, nice track

5.Ghetto Koyote
lyrics too fast!!!! hahaha, the beat is good but not my style, can't say much of this track, quality is good on this track, and the hook is good

6.Click Blow
beat is 100% my style, loving this one, the hook and gun effects on fits real good, the verses is nice, the lyrics sound good of what I can understand, ooh.. there lol.... this is a good track, my favourite so far, would love to hop in for a remix, fix a bit the processing and add some low reverb to it, with a nice EQ this track will be better of what it is, 10/10 no doubt

7.Love You
who's singing here?... damn I'm fucking loving this one, this goes straight to my mp3

8.Change Ur Mind
nice beat, I can understand better on this track, quality is good, you just need to put the volume up a bit, but gotta say this beat fits your flow and voice very nice, another extreme hook sample, str8 murder on this track, loving this one too

9.Trekkin
hmm, didn't like this one, couldn't understand much of it, worst quality so far, but I can figure out the lyrics are str8 good, cool track

10.Stick up
another familiar beat, I like this... the lyrics are good but some layovers are too loud for the common volume of the verses, this track is good but still needs some work... good track

11.Street Level Taster
:worship: @ the beat!!, the voice fits the track nice, the words spoken are nice, loving this concept, and fits perfect on the beat, quality is good here, a couple voice efects on the hook could make this a masterpiece!! Killa track

12.Floatin Away
beat sounds too fruity loopish, but the drums on it are fine, still needs to fix the quality a bit, and turn the acapellas a bit louder, but this is my kinda track again so I love it, sick track

13.Business
Quality is perfect on here, but the volume is too low... damn I'm enjoying this track much, 10/10 for sure and the lyrics and flow is amazing on this!!, the hook is great... str8 to my mp3, amazing track

14.cocoa diss
beat suck, but no comment on this track

Overall:

its an ep so can't jugde the quality that much, you got talent bro,
amazing flow on all tracks.. great work on this tape
some track really got me deep into listening...
looking forward to hearing more from you... if you wanna collab halla at me
nice tape!
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Re: ******The PREQUEL EP******

Postby HAYZI » Oct 1st, '07, 23:15

@risin' damn man i made that beat myself!lol

@wil tonite yeh theres a remix in progress

@love u thats mario singin man glad u liked it

@street level, glad u liked the beat so much my mate will be happy

@floatin away this beat werent made on fruity, u can re record the hook if u want, if s pm me


glad u enjoyed the tape man id like to get u on a hook and i think floatin away wud be good for u cos i gotta redo it anyway when my new mic gets here







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