URD Presents...

[Tash8]

why why why why why why why why

why what?

[Enimee]

u know

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[Kez]

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forgot bout this

got it downloading now leave feed asap

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Dead Soildier - nice beat,solid flow,lyricaly its on your usual level, hooks nice

I'm So Hot - aint feeling the beat, flows sounds kool but it aint my type of track aint feeling it

Shooting Time - first verse has good flow, lyrics are usual standard, chorus is kool, second verse is on par with the first, this verse, third verse, kez got good flow, i didnt think you'd would work on this concept but you flipped it nice, lyrics are good but youve had better

Dentist - lmao!

Murda Time - tash got a better flow not as choppy but some parts it sounds choopy again, lyrics sound kool, delivery isnt the best, ax-d , vicous flow and delivery sounds sick, lyrics are usual standard, kez got a strong flow, lyrics arent as good as you can do though

Another Brick In The Wall - hook is a good idea but it just doesnt work, kez first verse has a good flow again, some nice rhymes and delivery is good, second verse again has a good flow and some nice rhymes , ax-d as always strong flow lyrics are usual standard delivery is good

Price Of A Mc - fed before

Renegades - kez, got a good flow and nice lyrics delivery is there to, ax-d same standard as usual

So fresh - first verse, flow is rushed and prounouncation isnt clear deliveyr needs to be mor eintense aswell, lyrics sound ok from what i can hear,

All i Need - sick hook, might be borrowing a style from nas but its still sick, flow is sick, rhymes are good aswell, concept is good aswell along with the content, defiantly the best track on the tape so far

Uh-Oh - ax-d same standard as usual, c-riz rhymes and flow sound better than the last track you were on in this still have some of the same problems though, aint feeling the chorus

Close Your eyes - vocals are to though for the slow track btw, flow sounds like the best ive heard from you even though its simple and sorta choppy, delivery sounds good but its just not loud enough for it to have any emotional effect, defiantly your best ive heard though

Casket Dreams - as always strong flow, lyrics are the same standard and delivery is fine

Overall - the feed may seem short and repetetive but i really didnt hear anything new on this tape, the best track by far was Kez - all i need, and the biggest improve i heard was C-riz on close your eyes were i felt the mixing let down what could have been a powerful slow song. as a group tape to new listeners this is good quality although missing the strongest member by not having Sajjad on it at all, even an old track should have been there, as a group tape to people who have heard your stuff solo this just sounds like a bunch of collabs, i dont wanne sound harsh but Ax-D it sound as if your stuck in a safety zone with the flow and lyrics, its the same stuff we been hearing for alot of songs now, its good i aint knocking that part of it id just like you to have a track were im like "shit he just pulled off the impossible" , also kez's contribution exept for price of an MC and all i need, sounded like your old stuff full of rhymes towards haters and not working on the smart rhyming that youve been pulling off (in the tracks ive heard from your solo tape) extremely well. again its still a strong tape but itd be good if the next one blew me away were i wanted to keep it on repeat ya know.

i think the biggest let down was concepts, you should have tried some different types, to many concepts that aint really concepts there just exuses to rap about something, witch i myself do ALOT and its somehting i got to work on aswell lol

was a good tape, i dont think anyone hit there highest level they can on it, so i think there's alot of potential for the next group project, and still waiting for all ya'll next solo projects

[Xray]

cheaaa my homies holding it down downloading feed soon and im sorry for not being on this one but im releasing my tape next week more info in a new thread in a minute

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mucho gracias bar...
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[Kez]

I think a bit of bumpage is in order.

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bump...opps