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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 4th, '08, 15:13

Hadez wrote:i agree with 30, Kez's verse made the track. Tash sounded like he was really trying to add a little emotion to the track but somehow still ended up sounded monotone-ish. not sure how you can fix that. Bar's verse was hard for me to understand. but based on everything i did catch it was dope. Sajjad's verse was nice, but it didn't fit very well with the mixing n everything.

its an overall nice track, with Kez bein the highlight. :y:


thanx for the feedback man :worship: but could you make it more clear what parts you didnt understand so i know what words people are having are hard time understanding ?


edit - oh yeh for my feedbakc on the other guys

Kez was sick, great flow, great delivery, sick ylrics, i doubt some people on the site even picked up on some of the rhymes he had, really good verse, quality as always takes away a little :(

Tash - nice lyrics for a hook, delivery, prounouncation, flow was the best form you, even though it was just a hook tis defiantly a step in the right direction

sajjad, good verse, flow was there, and you delivered it well, lyrics were ok, singing wasnt good man :sweating: you should just give up on the singing unless your gonni have some lessons :whistle: no offence i aint any better ya know :p
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 4th, '08, 15:32

sick collab....
kez: quality is well mixed :y: ...lyrics are above decent :worship:
tash: delievery is nice ....ddecent shit from you..catchy
bar: good shit bar....
sajjad: mixed badly...but lyrics are sick


overall the volume could be raised....and mixing can be improved :whistle:
:y: worth listening tho
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby mart85 » Mar 4th, '08, 17:32

nice track guys

great verse from kez, everything was quite good (except the quality :sweating:)

tash, nice chorus I was feeling it... probably the best I heard from you...at first I thought you should have recorded some layovers but they came in for the second part of the hook, so it was cool :y:

bar, pretty nice verse, your delivery was on point and everything. keep it up :y:

sajjad, nice verse as usual, tho I must admit I wasn't feeling the singing part that much... but the rest was pretty sick :y: your singing voice isn't that bad, I think you have some potential actually but you might need more practise or some lessons like Bar said, idk I'm not an expert at that lol
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby Kez » Mar 4th, '08, 17:35

Thanks to everyone who's listened so far :worship:

Yeah, as we know quality is still an issue for me, but i'm glad you enjoyed my part (to those who did), along with the whole track etc :y:

Keep feedin! :y:
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby Jay-19 » Mar 4th, '08, 17:42

Damn! Kez and Sajjad killed this shit! Tash8 and Bar were also good, but I really liked Kez's and Sajjad's verses! The beat is really good, I love it! I can't complain on the delivery on anyone of you guys, you did awesome work all of you! Fuck the quality, the lyrics were tight as fuck so the quality doesn't matter. Although it wasn't that bad.

Overall I give this track 8! :y:
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby Kez » Mar 4th, '08, 17:52

KillahGoat wrote:Damn! Kez and Sajjad killed this shit! Tash8 and Bar were also good, but I really liked Kez's and Sajjad's verses! The beat is really good, I love it! I can't complain on the delivery on anyone of you guys, you did awesome work all of you! Fuck the quality, the lyrics were tight as fuck so the quality doesn't matter. Although it wasn't that bad.

Overall I give this track 8! :y:


:worship: Thanks
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby Xray » Mar 4th, '08, 22:11

Hadez wrote:i agree with 30, Kez's verse made the track. Tash sounded like he was really trying to add a little emotion to the track but somehow still ended up sounded monotone-ish. not sure how you can fix that. Bar's verse was hard for me to understand. but based on everything i did catch it was dope. Sajjad's verse was nice, but it didn't fit very well with the mixing n everything.

its an overall nice track, with Kez bein the highlight. :y:

thanks bro and kez did kill the fuck out the track :worship:

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:sick collab....
kez: quality is well mixed :y: ...lyrics are above decent :worship:
tash: delievery is nice ....ddecent shit from you..catchy
bar: good shit bar....
sajjad: mixed badly...but lyrics are sick


overall the volume could be raised....and mixing can be improved :whistle:
:y: worth listening tho

thanks for the support bro :worship:

mart85 wrote:nice track guys

great verse from kez, everything was quite good (except the quality :sweating:)

tash, nice chorus I was feeling it... probably the best I heard from you...at first I thought you should have recorded some layovers but they came in for the second part of the hook, so it was cool :y:

bar, pretty nice verse, your delivery was on point and everything. keep it up :y:

sajjad, nice verse as usual, tho I must admit I wasn't feeling the singing part that much... but the rest was pretty sick :y: your singing voice isn't that bad, I think you have some potential actually but you might need more practise or some lessons like Bar said, idk I'm not an expert at that lol

Thanks for the breakdown and yea i think i gotta get the old sajjad back *strictly verses* :whistle: :worship:

KillahGoat wrote:Damn! Kez and Sajjad killed this shit! Tash8 and Bar were also good, but I really liked Kez's and Sajjad's verses! The beat is really good, I love it! I can't complain on the delivery on anyone of you guys, you did awesome work all of you! Fuck the quality, the lyrics were tight as fuck so the quality doesn't matter. Although it wasn't that bad.

Overall I give this track 8! :y:

thanks for the feedback i really appreciate that bro :worship:

And Thanks To Tash For The Chorus, Kez For That Killa Verse & Bar For Killing this one....the other guy should stop singing :p
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby Tash8 » Mar 4th, '08, 22:32

mart85 wrote:tash, nice chorus I was feeling it... probably the best I heard from you...at first I thought you should have recorded some layovers but they came in for the second part of the hook, so it was cool :y:


thx and yea i felt like if i added overlays only to the second time it went thru it might be a less repetative idk lol :unsure:

thanks everyone else for feed!
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 5th, '08, 01:36

yo, I posted feed too... its on the first page, dunno if any of u guys noticed it
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby Kez » Mar 5th, '08, 01:49

30-3 wrote:yo, I posted feed too... its on the first page, dunno if any of u guys noticed it


I did :y:
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 5th, '08, 03:14

haha bar you make me laugh bro
you seriously must listen to some shitty music
but whatever its you
but remember where hip hop started fucker AMERICA MOTHER FUCKER!!!!!!! :hooray: :king: \:D/
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby Tash8 » Mar 5th, '08, 03:34

next person to talk about where hip hop originated in this thread is gonna get a kick in the crutch
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 5th, '08, 03:39

Chet wrote:
sticcy z wrote:haha bar you make me laugh bro
you seriously must listen to some shitty music
but whatever its you
but remember where hip hop started fucker AMERICA MOTHER FUCKER!!!!!!! :hooray: :king: \:D/


you fuckin' idiot it didn't start here, trust me hip hop from there is 10x better then insane clown pussies

and trust me it sucks 10 times worse than some of the shit over here
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby Speech » Mar 5th, '08, 22:31

sticcy z wrote:
Xray wrote:cheers :beerchug: and sticcy z im from australia not europe and the fact that you think everyone raps with american accents is ridiculous..cause thats what it sounded like you were disappointed in us not having same accents like you..but you relise that england is proper engllish right? ;)

of course i know that
but yes i like the track
i dont like there accents
and thats what takes away from the song
foriegn rap may be your cup of tea thats fine
but im not a fan of rap outside of america
it just sounds awkward


my 2 cents :coffee:



haha man what u mean?...u see i don't like other accents to rap too..but thatz something ppl are not responsible for..i'm german (half afro american) and i speak nothing but german all day..what you think of my accent? plus sajjad sounds way more american than me, and he ain even american haha

checking the track out now...just had to holla at this guy real quick
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Re: Taking Action [Kez, Tash8, Bar, SaJJad]

Postby Speech » Mar 5th, '08, 22:40

cool shit..i liked all the verses..liked kez's most..dunno why haha, just felt it :y: ...tash on the hook..cool..kinda catchy and sajjad, fire as always..hmm i dont see no problem with the singin haha
8 / 10
keep shit like that up..who made the beat? tash production?

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