King Jafee wrote:I been in the streets folks!!!
My bad for not commenting!!!!
the King has servants that need lashings!!!
Feedback for all cuz thats what we all want!!!
and i wasnt tryin to be mean about Rain...
Im just being real....
remember when they used to keep it 100 all the time...
yeah those days were nice....
Up in London, I'm an OG,
through the dungeons, to the cold streets,
If you snitchin' I'll catch you, slippin' and clap you
Cuz May got brains and balls bigger than apples
ok.."king"..why you just quoted s.a.s. ?..and please stop actin like you the shit...i see the niqqa in ya but homie...don't over do it .....feeding your track in a minute
EDIT : aaite checked it out hmmmmm...beat was ok..delivery was there but incomplete..some parts where it was ok being "quiet", but other parts really needed some energy...speak up...another thing that bothered me was the blank parts...idk whats with that if you just ran out of rhymes somewhere or you really had this in mind...but after all, didn come out the way i think it should....lyrics were ok...no complainin there..agree with you on the style thing...you flow the way you flow...your businezz...
but again....don act like you the shit smelling like chanell no. 5 , that shitz just gay...you expected negative feedback, i can tell, cuz if you didn, you wouldn have fronted from the beginning on
please stop that thatz almost discusting homie
keep tha rap thing up tho...you'll improve
