[Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx non stop
great review....glad u liked it

[SajN]

yeah NoN-Stop... The Infection.. whatever... I'm not going to make u call me The Infection.. it's clearly that you want non-stop back...

And No Problem. Really good album

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

chea thx ...spammer why not posting a whole review in one post lol
anywayz keep it coming

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Chea about to go to bed, so Chea I'm gonna review the shit some more.....Chea

What I did: Chea Chea Chea Chea Chea Chea Chea Chea ........I don't like this track. I think it's just cause I dislike the beat so much, cause you do a good job at rapping, but the beat just kills me

Raise ya lighter: Chea this track is fucking awesome, your voice is great on this, I'm listening to it for the 3rd time in a row and I'm just loving it more and more. Your fucking great on it....I liked bar's verse, but I think Sajjad would of been better on the chorus, but that being said the chorus is still hot.....CheaCheaCheaCheaChea

A German kid on a track with a Scottish kid....I love this place.....Chea.....Chea

lol considering i wrote the chorus there's no way you could say sajjad would have been better coz he wouldnt have written the same chorus lol


thanx to everyone who commented on my contribution, apreciate it


and i downloaded this ill check out it and hit you up with a review soon

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx bar..cant wait for ur good reviews *dickriding*..kididng umm okay...i better stop now
waiting

[Big Proof 4ever]

ur tape is hella good i wont feed song by song cuz im too lazy but overall good tape of course too much chea and shit plus flow is boring sometimes it seems like u hear different beat different lyrics but same flow,all collabos were kool and ma fav song is to be different

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz profaz glad u could enjoy it

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

guess its time for my 1st BUMP

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

i aint breaking up verse by verse, ill only do that on features.

intro - really nice works perfect

awake - voice is to weak you sound as if your goin to die nearer the end of the bars lol, pronouncation could be better, hook is mixed feeling, its a good diea but doesnt work. by the way the adlibs are annoying especially the CHEA really its annoying as fuck...to the point its stops me enjoying the track....anywae, your flow is still choppy you breathing break up the flow and doesnt allow it to sound smoothly, i think its coz you might not be doin enough takes of the verse before recording but idk, btw idk what this track is about..i cant make sense of the lyrics..lyrical below average

We are back - mixing on the chorus its terrible, far to weak and makes it have no effect, other than mixing it sounds like a good chorus, flow is alot better on this alot more smooth, adlibs again really annoying your overlays are to strong aswell, they are suppose ot have a small boost to the words not overpower the core recording lol sajjad was sick, love the tooth fair lines really sick man, great flow lyrics were great delivery was really nice, overlays were a little strong on this verse aswell lol, but great verse man

What i did - beat is cheesy, chorus is horrible, your flow nicely to it somethig i wasnt expecting coz the beat itself is bad, lyric swere nothing short of terrible..you rhymed c-riz with c-riz for 4 bars....lol you flow really well on this especially the start of the second verse. beat ruins it but the mc performence is good for you.

Raise Ya Lighter - already told you what i thought of you on this when we did it together lol

Physco - you sound tired as if you cant keep up with the beat, but you keep on beat, lyrics were average, spizzy, great chorus, flow is flawless you gel with the beat greatly man, lyrics are really nice, delivery is awesome really sick verse man love it, mic jump part, quality isnt a problem thats good, when ou mic pass you cant help compare and spizzy really outshines lol, c-riz's parts were same as his first verse.

Pressure - terrible song, sorry i dont like the beat or the style of the song or the way the concept doesnt suit the beat...aint feeling this.

No More hate - chorus goes off beat at some parts, i dont think the delivery fits the beat, should be a little more up-beat and agressive to suit the flow fo the beat (imo coz thats just a personel thing lol) lyrics are average again. flow is back to being broken up again.

I Pray - your alot clearer spoken on this and the flow is nice, this is your best track delivery wise coz its so much clearer and i can understand everythign crystal clear, beats really nice aswell, lyrics dont need to be complex coz the concept so thats kool, best track so far

To Be Different - again your alot clearer on this, your defiantly suited to a slower flow, flow on this is best on the mixtape, delivery is really nice, beat is awesome love the sampled hook although i think your speaking over it could have been quiter for a more background effect, or maybe even not have it at all, best track so far man.

What We Got - alreayd gave feed.

Outro - ......you leave your best stuff on the whole tape for the outro ? seriously alot better flow on the outro part.


Overall - i dont think i ever fully checked out your first tape or ep or whatever it was lol but i know youve improved alot so good looking on that, usually i would be as harsh coz you have improved but this whole thread is blowing false hope your way, your flow is still in-consistent your defiantly suited to a slower flow not just becuase you speak clearer on it but because you dont have the lungs to go any more energetic than slow flows as evident on the more up beat tracks were you dont keep up, that can be solved by doin more takes of the verses untill you have it perfect and sometimes it does take up to 20-30 takes to get it right, dont be thinking people do everything in one take lol lyricall you need to step your game up alot i didnt hear one decent puncline in the whole tape, no rhymes caught my attention, there was no attempts at different types of concepts, there were different concepts but nothing out of the ordinary that every rapper hasnt alreayd done 10000 times, not that thats a negative i mean everyone does that but usually they try put a spin on it, the most creative track was physco with the mic bounce, and when thats the creative highlight you know somethings up lol

so id say you need to get a consistent beat style or tempo your good with and stick to it once youve mastered it then go onto different things. More practice before spitting your verses. Lyricaly get better coz on the real everything on this is below average - average some of it was just plain bad. be more creative and try think of better concepts.


also i was disapointed on the beat choice i would have loved to have heard some tash beats in there for the whole URD thing plus when producer and mc works on the track together the overall track always has alot nicer feel to it.

anywae, keep it up and keep puting the work in

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

oh shit thx bar appreciate ur honest opinion...yea i cant be bothered to record a take 500 times may be true...i'll take more time to make further tracks...
....and i guess my english needs to improve for lyrics *studies* lol
thx again

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

yea i cant be bothered to record a take 500 times

sorry man but youve hit a sore note.

whats the point in anyone listening if youve just admitted you cant be bothered puting in the effort ?

if thats the attitude then whats the point in rapping man

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

well i do it like 10 times till im pretty statisfied with it and then its good.. damn how i get myself outta there now lol ....and well...oh damn...i will pput more effort in it...promised
i always record one verse as a whole.....but as you said...record it ..listen to it till i have it saved in my mind and then re-record prolly the best thing to do

[Jay_LP1]

After reading all the song's reviews , do read the summary in the end.

Awake - You're putting too much energy in the song which makes you look fake . And I didn't get what the song was about . Mixing is also bad . You need more practice . Beat is almost average

1/10

We're back - Well the beat is annoying , mixing is not good . It makes your verse bad coz one can't understand what you're tryin to say moreover ur pronunciation is not good in this . Sajjad permormed it good . Hook is ok.

2/10

What I did - Hook is really horrible as it is almost impossible to understand what you're saying . Verse is better than hook . That takes me to ur lyrics . "I don't give a fuck about u" . Is that all you can think for a song? Moreoever you're rhyming with c-riz on 4 lines . How about rhyming it with another word?

0.5 / 10

Raise ya lighter - I was really looking forward to this song as many were giving it good reviews (100/10 by ax-d) . But I was really disappointed after hearing it . Bar is pronouncing "lighter" totally wrong just to rhyme with previous line . Man this totally sucks . Try to pronounce the word right . Verse of bar was ok . As usual your verse was difficult to understand at some points.

And one more thing . 100/10 is a big joke . That would be 100000000/10 for an eminem song . You know what I mean?

1/10

Psycho - this song is somewhat better in flow and ur delievery(only in first verse) . Didn't like the beat . Spizzy did a good job on this song . Chorus sounds off the beat . Mixing is not good

2.5/10

Pressure - no words for this ....
0/10

No more hate - Flow , chorus , mixing , lyrics and beat , everythin is below average . everythin sounds off beat.

0.5/10

I pray - Thankgod finally a song where you sound clear . Phew!! This is a song worth listening to . Everythin is ok in this song.

3.5/10

To Be Different - The only nice thing about this is song is sampling on the hook part . Everythin is just average . Somewhat enjoyable.

4/10

What we got - already left feed . After listening the album , lower the rating to 2/10


Summary-

"Fuck u all , fuck u all " , is it all you can think of? How many times we've to listen the same thing again and again? Don't you think you don't have any creativity? First of all I can't understand much of your lyrics . And the ones I do , they're almost same in every song . Whom are you referring to anyway? How about giving your lyrics with the songs? Why are you faking so much?

And how about practicing ur verses like 200 times before you actually record it? Coz you really need to do that if you want some good verses . You know this album of yours make "Taking Over" a thousand times better thing .

Your pronunciation has improved but your bad choice of songs , lyrics and beats make this album a total time wastage . Think about your style again and try to write songs with new ideas . And don't believe those who say "8/10 or 100/10" coz it's really really not that good. Try to sell this thing and tell me how many copies you sold with positive reviews .

And hey my reviews are based with the commercial market . This is where you really stand in business of music.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Raise ya lighter - I was really looking forward to this song as many were giving it good reviews (100/10 by ax-d) . But I was really disappointed after hearing it . Bar is pronouncing "lighter" totally wrong just to rhyme with previous line . Man this totally sucks . Try to pronounce the word right . Verse of bar was ok . As usual your verse was difficult to understand at some points.

nah man now your being a dick, i prounounce lighter the way it is prounounced in english maybe you dont know the laungage properly

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/lighter


the only difference with my prounouncation of fighter and lighter is its slightly like fightur and lightur thats the way i and every other scottish person in the world who isnt speaking posh talks, and at that im not changing the prouncation to rhyme coz both of them are prounounced in the same manner.

man i take criticism very well and i apreciate your honest opinion coz i know it isnt that good, ask tash i was talking to him about it not being good last night so he can back me up there, but i do not change the prouncation to rhyme and i dont like people telling me i do coz i take pride in my rhymes and i dont do shit like that, so maybe you need to re listen but both of them are prounounced in the same manner and rhyme and if they are prounounced in a posh english mannger they also rhyme so there's no way or reason that i would change the pronoucation to make them rhyme when they already rhyme.




@ chet - hes being honest and i agree with him on nearly all the reviews so maybe you should re-evaluate your review lol

[Kez]

You're entitled to your opinion, but i'll just point out:

Raise ya lighter - I was really looking forward to this song as many were giving it good reviews (100/10 by ax-d) . But I was really disappointed after hearing it . Bar is pronouncing "lighter" totally wrong just to rhyme with previous line . Man this totally sucks . Try to pronounce the word right . Verse of bar was ok . As usual your verse was difficult to understand at some points.

I think that's just Bar's natural Scottish accent to be honest.

PS: My review's comin